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Chapter 83(?)-90. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I'm beyond words. Just when I think that there will be a confrontation between the new and old Uchiha that will lead to deathly and sad outcomes, you and your amazingly scheming juice filled brain comes up with this! Unexpected on my part and what wonderful surprise to find that Madara is finally being Madara without his zest of pretending to be Izuna. I love how this is going! I'm eager to see how the other children will fare away from Terrasade and how the next meeting will be. Oh the possible mayhem and loss. And Centre. What Centre will do, I can't imagine.

Chapter 87 - a nice diversion. I keep waiting for Sumiko to become a little less self-centered, but perhaps that will always be her nature. She's obviously extremely dangerous given her influence over Sai. It will be interesting to see if, or how, you address the artificial intelligence conundrum. Unlike everything else in this story except Centre, Sai's power seems almost limitless; will the fact he was "raised right" be enough or will power necessarily corrupt?

Chapter 88 - Judging from "Colours of the Mind," as well as this story, Centre is not malicious, just unconcerned with the effects of its actions on others; everyone else is just another smashed bug on the windshield. I had thought you would defuse Madara before Centre but I was wrong. Anyway, a good chapter!

Chapter 89 - So is Tsuneo the love of Shikamaru's life? There are so many possibilities with age retard.

The offer seems too good for Madara. But if it means that he and Kurotsuchi will go away, then I can live with it. I feel like you are planting seeds with Tsuneo. Does that mean that will be with Shikamaru when he gets older? Perhaps. Kind of reminds me of the story The Agreement by Jelp. It would be strange to read about but I find some of the pairings in this series strange to begin with. At least if it does happen Shikamaru will be with the one most like Na-chan. I'm glad we got to see Madara shaking in his boots a little.

But he IS not going to release the virus??? Right? Or is he going to do that and then protest against it to get rid of Kurotsuchi?
Damn, and it was starting to look so good...
Madara growing in power in a distance may seem like a good resolve right now but in a few standards he may strike again.... I don't like this idea. And hate that he is spoiling Izuna's good name.
No Ector in this chapter? I can't wait to learn something about him and if his intentions are really what he claims them to be?
I can't wait to see.

Well this is a suitably terrifying development. Loved this chapter though, particularly Centre's threat. It'll be interesting to see the reaction if he takes the deal and reveals his identity. Next Saturday cannot come soon enough!

OMG!!! I was scared nervous and angry! Old man just makes me sick!! But what was worse was the witch coming in with that virus idea. SQ you are on top of your game:) I can hear the wheels turning:) This was a marvelous chapter!!! Today was a very sad day for me. My youngest brother passes away today was the service. Thank you for being here for me when I really need to give my mind a rest:) I truly think of you as my friend. Ok I'm still a little weep and sad. But Tsuneo and Haku-san have a way of making me smile:) Thank you again Space Queen I enjoyed ^_^

If you never stopped writing this story, I'd never stop reading it. No matter how many times I go back to the start, it's hard to put it down. I love the characters and I love where you've taken it - there are always new surprises. I am looking forward to new chapters before I even get to the end of the most recent update. Thanks for keeping at it even as real life gets in the way - so many authors drop their stories when that happens, and I'm glad that hasn't happened here; the only thing worse than the story coming to it's end would be if it stopped without an ending at all.

I've been waiting for this particular chapter since Izuna first approached Bettencourt. I'm relieved with how the plan worked out and it should definitely be interesting to see Shika's interactions with Centre.

Well that was a relief. Thank goodness for Klenn-San! I didn't understand why Bettencourt would say that he was honoring the request from Klenn when he didn't consider him a friend, but then I went back and re-read to better understand what was being said. Now I see that Bettencourt wished he could have been a friend to Klenn. At least I hope I'm right, I also hope maybe Bettencourt can become friends with Shika and become an ally. Anyway, I really enjoyed this chapter and look forward to the next! Thank you for all your hard work.

O BOGOWIE!!!!!!!!!!!! Yes, it’s my native tounge…
This chapter was…. SPECTACULAR!!!! I have no idea where to start. Every word was just…. Fantastic!!!!
And the best was: KLENN!!!!!
So he was the mysterious reason behind Shika being declined of joining the CCS…
It’s been so long since I laughed out loud reading this story. Recently it was mostly in tears….
Damn, I loved it.
So, THAT’s what the typed seven means, huh? Wow…. I knew Shika was amazing, but this… really…. I hope Neji is impressed. I hope Shika just rocked his world. I know he always knew that Shika is special but I know he still underestimated him, because Shika was too… humble is not the right word… too normal.
Is Sasuke now more aware of what he has in his clutches??? (Sorry he angered me by giving up Shika…)
I was glad that Iruka’s name did’t left Shikamaru’s mouth, because then Centre would probably try to take him away and forced him to ‘work on’ other type 7s!!! ha ha!
“Shikamaru decided the safest answer was a smile.” – it always is, isn’t it?
Funny thing…
Kelenn is (I refuse to say WAS) truly amazing!
I can’t believe I like the OC so much. I never do. But he’s just…. Damn….
And now I begin to wonder how Battencourt looks. Is he attractive?
Please…. I never ask for that, but… No, I still won’t try to rush you. I’ll just - perfectly content - calmly say that I can’t wait for the next Saturday and that I THANK YOU SO ERY BERY MUCH for this chapter. It’s a masterpiece!

I loved this chapter, I was on pins and needles wondering how the negotiations would go. I especially loved when Sasuke lost it when the guy asked about buying Shikamaru. Thank you for another great chapter.