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Ah, I love Shikamaru and Haru time together. I'm guessing a chapter after next one we'll see Centre arriving - that will also be interesting to watch.
Crafty distracting Shika. I love your voice of him.

chapter 77
NO! PLEASE DON’T…..!
It started so well. So nice. Seeing Madara suffer was refreshing. It had a taste of a real victory!
And then Shika…. It’s like he is the price of this victory…. Definitely highly overprized!
Two divs? ….
Why is the center so powerful? What the fuck are they? Rulers of the world? Can’t Shika arrange his own death or something? It’s ridiculous. He’s with one of the most powerful and prestigious clans in the universe and even they can’t do nothing to save him? To take him back?
Seriously, what are their rights? On what are they founded? How far does their power reach? Can they make Madara a clan leader in appreciation of his ‘help’?
Now I wonder, how much did Klennton D. knew about the Uchihas. Did he knew about mysteries connected to Izuna, his body and his brother? Was he afraid of that making the note in his will, the one about Haru not swearing to Uchiha?
What is the Center really? Does it have a leader or a council? Is it ruled by tronnies? So far it’s some scary demon lurking everywhere, like the communist power (sorry, I’m from Poland). Is the Center made of people or organizations? What are their goals if they already have everything? With this level of power they should be a bit like Klenn, bored and decadent, but they seem nothing like it. It looks like they have some goal… some reason to exist? It can’t be about money, can it? They can have all the money in the world I imagine…. The possibilities here are endless…. I must stop before I get lost.
Amazing chapter!

Woo! Messy room!
Poor Shika! Everyone expects him to be a genius in all the nuances of life. Im still trying to decide if Neji not claiming him is a good thing or not. I dont like it but i can understand why Neji wont make the claim. Shikas reaction is very much like someone trying to float rather than drown but thats understandable considering how long their relationship with rings had been. Now having a similar relationship but without the commitment aspect must really put Shika off-kilter. Especially as so many of the rest of the crew seem to ignore the relationship he has with Neji. It must be taking its toll on Neji too. It seems the whole crew thinks less of him for hurting Shika and they seem less concerned about how he is doing.

Cant wait for the next chapter!

I think Madara would be spitting like a mad cat if he'd heard Ino's description of his personality. I love when he's made fun of, and I especially love when he's aware of it and can't do anything about it. I'm glad to see Neji and Shika back together. I think they're soul mates. It's still cute that Sumiko and Naruto are still so protective of their Shika. I love the chapter, and as always, I look forward to more. I'm also glad to see that the story has a bit left to go. Thank you for all your hard work! Satterb

Chapter 76. OMG! I never thought of Ino and Sakura together. I mean, with the way the story was progressing and how concentrated I am on Sasuke and Uchiha as a whole, I didn't think that Ino would mate for life with Sakura and want to breed with Shikamaru. The whole mate and breeding brings to mind another author's story. Don't know if you know her. Ayato De'Aniege is her name and she's Ayato here on AFF. She's got some awesome stories of her own that you may like.

„ I would prefer not to tell her that you are in the storage cupboard.” Ha ha ha ! Yes, that would be unwise…. Jeez…. Sai is like JARVIS sometimes.
I love everybody’s input into the situation. Poor Shika…
Now, if they now know that Izuna-Madara was interested in Sakura why aren’t they suspicious? Izuna was male only!!!

„ I would prefer not to tell her that you are in the storage cupboard.” Ha ha ha ! Yes, that would be unwise…. Jeez…. Sai is like JARVIS sometimes.
I love everybody’s input into the situation. Poor Shika…
Now, if they now know that Izuna-Madara was interested in Sakura why aren’t they suspicious? Izuna was male only!!!

Hello there. I love your work! It is my favourite fanfic. I am just re-reading it for the second time. I started all the way at the beginning and fell in love all over again. I usually read a few chapters before going to bed. I've done this for a few nights. What happened next, of course, was bound to happen eventually: I dreamt of the world you have so wonderfully written. I'm sorry to say I don't remember much except that someone had to be moved between ships and Itachi was going to be a 'queen' as a result. And Haku was present as well. I haven't been able to keep up with the current chapters. But with the speed I read and my eagerness to see what happens next, for all I know it could be true already! I guess I will have to wait and see hehe. Please don't think that nobody doesn't read or appreciate all that you have written. I'm sure I am not the only one. With that in mind, please keep up the awesome work. I eagerly await the next chapter always!

Yay! Chapter 75. LOL. Full force panic on Sasuke's part with Shikamaru, in his haste, leaving worry for everyone else. My mind's yelling, "Don't let Izuna go so easily!" doesn't help me when I'm reading the chapters. As a reader, knowing who and how bad the other party is to the protagonist, is frustrating just because the yelling won't help the good guys realize any sooner that someone needs to be 6' under. Hahahah~ Thanks very much for the update! I'm looking forward to the mayhem and chaos that will ensue!

Oh!!! So good! I loved Sasukes reaction to finding Shika and the "girls" relaxing in Madaras old office. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thank you so much for the wonderful story.