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person eunmook
schedule March 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The joy you bring to my sundays! I don't suppose being overwhelmed with the story would fly as an excuse for not reviewing even if it is true. Is it strange of me to feel a little bereft that this time it really was Orochimaru, which means the game is coming to an end and you're beginning to mop up - an impression reinforced by the recycling of old characters for team Madara instead of introducing new ones. I guess its like the child growing up thing - its inevitable, but you can't help wishing you could put it off some more. Shika getting stuck on Ino's legs! Nice.
schedule March 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Shikamaru having an 'itch' almost gave me heart attack! Though not only me as it seems. Damn, you know how to build some tension...
I'm glad his fine, but I hope Sasuke will rip him another for that stund. Seriusly how could he be so stupid to leave and without telling anyone!? Come on... He deserves some punishment.
Sakura didn't have a fangirl attack? She grew or something?
I hope Shikamaru staring at Ino's legs doesn't mean anything. That would be... I don't even want to think about it.
So, what now? Where is Madara hiding? Are there any leads betraying his true identity? I can't stand the thought that poor Izuna's nam is so spoiled...
person Moonmoore
schedule March 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You had me worried for a sec. I'm glad that Shikamaru seems satisfied with the outcome. Happy that both Sakura and Ino are okay and away from Izuna/Madara. Thanks for the chapter. Always waiting for more.


Moonmoore.
schedule March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was interesting. I wasn't expecting Madara to retreat like that nor was I expecting Orochimaru to be so stupid with his last entreaty. Is letting Madara go going to come back and bite Uchiha in the ass? Have we met Kimmimaro before? I always thought Naruto was the best defense Sasuke had but you made it seem like Kimmimaro was a huge threat but I can't help but feel like I would remember him if he was. Both the speech and the song were well done. Where does the story go from here? Is the conflict over with Madara? Will Sasuke ever find out that he's not Izuna Uchiha? Questions abound. I look forward to wherever this story is leading to. Good job as usual.
person Procrastination_is_key
schedule March 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Kimmimaru is like mould. No mater how many times you think you've killed it, it always comes back. I think Sumaru will find himself as Sasuke's bodyguard again. I look forward to a fight between Sumaru and Kimmimaru (and maybe Lee). Symbiote showdown!

Otherwise a clever though impractical plan by Madara. Clever Shika to have the strongest Uchiha crews fill the policing role. Their loyalty would make them even more of an asset than Terrasade's police. I wonder what Madara's plans are now? The deliberate shun Sasuke gave him was good (worthy of a secondary school girl's cold shoulder in its execution) as was Sumaru's. I'm hoping his rage will make him slip up.

Looking forward to next week's chapter!
schedule March 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
74-So it wasn't Haku to hold the blade.... Too bad. He deserved this pleasure, I'm sure.
The support of people was astounding! A song was a nice accent.
I'm glad you didn;'t let Shika out to be there with them. It would only caused me a headache worrying that something might happen. I still can't get over the Centre knowing about him.
Naruto as a partner instead of a bodyguard? Does that mean that ha Kimimaro challenge Sasuke then Kakashi would have to fight him? And then he would probably die.... That would be awfull. Besides I hope that Naruto is still great and strong and amazing enough to be able to kick Kimimaro's ass!
I'm not happy about Madara's escape. Damn... and Oro is dead so the secret of his identity is still a secret....
And now I have to wait another week to find out more. What now? What are they planning now when they're back in Terrasade? What does Madara planning? (Probably not suicide?....tooo bad.)
Thank you for an exciting chapter.
person Destiny
schedule March 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, things going to get even more interesting. I can't wait to read what happens next! X)
person SunaoTsuji
schedule March 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 74. Woot! OMG you've got my nerves in a knot. I've been refreshing chapter 73 hoping to see the 'next chapter' options and to be surprise, there it was! Yay! You've out done yourself and when I think that something will go one way, you tell it your way and I'm left wondering 'what the hell just happen?' Even though the vendetta is over for Pien, Kabuto and Orochimaru, my guts is still screaming 'die Madara!' But considering that only Madara knows that he's Madara and not Izuna, I can't wait for the next update!!!! Thanks for today's update! <3333 Keep up the awesome writing!!!! P.S. They should let us publish fanfiction like Japan publishes doujinshi, cause, man, I want a hard copy of your Tales in Tarrasade as well as your original stories. Anyway, you'll always have the best of luck and wishes heading your way from me and I'll be looking forward to reading even more stories written by you.
person Moonmoore
schedule March 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter as always. I felt the tension and anticipation throughout the chapter. I couldn't anticipate any of what happened. I feel as if am in tenterhooks. I love it! Thanks for the amazing chapter! You are an awesome writer. I am still shocked with the death of Orochimaru. Haven't digested completely. I feel like Sasuke's action will come back and bite him in the rear. I really hope it doesn't. Thanks and take care!

Sincerly


Moonmoore
person redtatsu
schedule March 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another fabulous chapter! I can't even imagine what you will write next. Until next week!