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Brilliant Chapter! I'm getting all excited now! Cant wait to find out what happens!

I will say that as much wrong as Madara has done, he's funny. His thoughts, his reactions, everything is just so ridiculous, that it's hard not to like him a teensy little bit. His bit about Sakura probably being in love with him had me rolling. That being said, some interesting developments here. I knew that we were waiting for the kits to come of age but for some reason I didn't make the connection to us ending the vendetta. At all. It was nice to see Sasuke finally confront Madara, I wonder if the truth about him not being Izuna will come out.

I am happy that you are still writing this story and I hope you know that we do appreciate the time you have put in to make this story both available and awesomely written to us every week.

Madara thinks Sakura must be in love with him....I almost peed my pants laughing! I'm dying to know who Madara is signalling! I hope Sasuke and his team members have already figured this out! So much excitement left to go. I can hardly wait. Till then, I hope all is well with you and yours. Thanks for all your hard work.

Sorry it has been so long since I last reviewed. I usually read this on my phone and its too small write anything of any length.

Interrogation (Chapters 68-70)
I liked how Shika was the main focus of this section and how the interaction between Sasori and Kabuto and Orochimaru was shown via the hidden cameras which allowed for the main crew's reactions to the 'experiment'. Shika seems to think the reasonable questions-even i felt sorry for Kabuto after Sasori'd had his way with him.

I sincerely hope nothing happens between Kotohime and Shika, she enjoyed Kabuto's torment far too much. Poor Neji! I like that he is putting himself through his own form of hell by letting Shika mess up his room. It shows how important Shika is to him, and how much Neji has grow from 'In the cold of space...' when he considered it and invasion into his personal space. Still my favourite couple!

Temptation (Chapter 71)
Poor Sasuke! Having Orochimaru dangle the possible answers to his problems in front of him. Although, maybe he's just desperate to survive. Anyway, a tough decision for Sasuke to take all on his lonesome. I'm glad that Naruto backed him up, although you do wonder just how useful they and the information could have been if Sasuke does procede with the Vendetta (and there are no/few mishaps).

I'm glad that the experiment is over and that Shika can rest and let Neji take care of him. ^^

Promises (Chapter 72)
The big litter's 14th birth anniversary! At last!
It was nice to see it from Haru's perspective, especially the parts with Ran. And he has the plaque now as well, hopefully he will be sensible when he gives it Ran (and really cute, would be nice :P ). I feel bad for Ran thinking that the main use of empaths is to be sex slaves but well done to Haru to be be able to ad lib the right thing to say to make Ran feel better. The kiss was very sweet. I think Haru will have to spend alot of brain power on making sure Ran is comfortable which is probably a better use of it than worrying over something else.
Haru and Ran are one of the longest realationships from the big litter and they seem to be the most innocent! Aw bless, Haru fell asleep, so they just snuggled instead! How cute!

The compliment about Iruka's knife skills from Kakashi was also very cute. ^^

Signals (Chapter 73)
I'm not a fan of Madara. He leaves a bad aftertaste after reading from his point of view (its just his character, not the writing of it). I can understand its necessity though. This time I felt positively gleeful by the end. Nicely done Sasuke and co. That must be such a relief for Sumaru to have someone higher than Madara/Izuna. I thought Itachi would take more delight in telling Madara that Kyuua was the legitamate heir, however I suppose Madara hasn't been outed yet. It was very nice to see that this realization did indeed disrupt all of Madara's plans. The idea about claiming Kyuua isn't worthy of being heir as his jump off point for his own leadership campaign seems rather weak. I don't think he's firing on all cylinders nor has he realised the impact of Naruto on their world.

I'm looking forward very much to the next chapter. I would like to see Madara's plans fail just a little bit more. ;)

(Apologies if this posts multiple times. It wont tell me if its posted.)

Chapter 73. Oh hell no! Madara got screwed! I loved how Madara expected more announce from Sasuke via video and instead was side wiped with Sasuke being present in the room. Oh the suspense and Madara's plans blew to bits. I can't wait for more updates as to what will happen! I'm so excited! Thanks for updating and the awesome writing! Greatly appreciated. <3333

WWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOHAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!
That was so brilliant! It took my breath away!
I’ve been waiting for so long to ‘see’ all this!
It just couldn’t possibly go any better!
GLORIOUS DAY!
Sasuke’s entry was… damn, I don’t even have words for all this…. Wow…
And when Kuuya said “He or SHE…” I laughed so hard!
It was the best chapter ever!
PERFECT!
Mannah – sama, you’re absolutely brilliant!
M-arvelous!
A-mazing!
N-ever failing!
N-oble! and
A-bsolutely brilliant
H-ero for all her faithfull fans!
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! For this chapter and every other one you shared with us.

I loved the chapter! Had me in the edge of my seat the entire time I was reading and crazy butterflies doing stunts in my belly! It left me craving more. I loved how you timed the whole thing, especially when Sasuke made his grand entrance. I am very keen to see the Killing Square showdown. Is going to be epic!

Thanks once more the awesome work! Take care and see u soon!

Moonmoore

It's been a while since I've reviewed. I'm very sorry! I still enjoy your story, but you asked for opinions as to why the number of hits may have dropped. I thought I would tell you why it's been a while since I have read faithfully. To be honest... when the focus of the story shifts away from Sasuke and Naruto, I lose interest. I loved "In the cold of space" because the cast was small and I could afford to emotionally invest in them. I just don't have it in me to care about all of the spacers and all of the children. That being said, I think you've created an amazing world! Thank you for seeing this story through!

Just wanted to let you know, I do read every post that ou do and have been following your stories from before when you did the original characters and then moved Naruto into the universe.

I dont whant to come off as a stalkeror creeper though but this is like the first review Ive left for an author ever. I always kind of figured they had better things to do than read every message from some random person.

Anyway, please dont feel disscouraged, and know thaat you have real fans out there.

I'm sorry I never review that often but I love your stories! I've been following them for I don't know how long, but they are amazing! The detail and twists in your writing are unbelievable. Please keep it up! I know sometimes it must be very hard to keep on writing but I'm sure you have other readers out there like myself who mightn't always write a review or rate probably because like me never know what to say because our heads are still reeling from your story or we don't want to sound like idiots (like I do right now!) But trust me we are all hear silently in the background reading on in amazement at your magnificent stories! I would love for you to write a book because no mater what it's about I would buy it! Please keep it up! Love Kat xxx