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Since you asked for more feedback, I thought I'd just let you know that I love this story. It's the only thing I read on this entire site anymore. I've been reading since In The Cold of Space, and I've since gone back and reread it from the start at least four or five times now. I'm going to be so disappointed when it does end; I could read about these characters and this universe forever. So thank you for all the time and work that's gone into writing it.

I love this story. I love all of your stories actually, and I have read all of them several times. But, I am not so good at waiting for a the next update. I have been so fortunate in the past because I started reading all of your after they were finished. By the time I got to the next story, it was done and I could keep going. I have to force myself to stop reading your story until there are several more chapters. I also have a problem stopping myself form reading your story when something exciting is happening and you don't know who will die. I have to read until it is solved, which is bad as i have work to do. Maddening, your stories are so wonderful they madden me.
Please keep writing, both the naruto stories and the originals they are all amazing, I love you. Seriously, I love you.
Rose

I haven't written since you started the first chapter of this story. I am a loyal fan and read the story every week. I am in love with all of your stories and I do hope you will continue. I realise that people like me just like to read the story and enjoy while you put so much thought into the plot. I really apprieciate the effort and care you put into your story and love the charactures. I am a big fan. please continue with the story.

I can't imagine that someone who's read this far could possible lose interest in this story. I just want you to know that there are still some of us that look forward to every Saturday, and relish every update. As far as plot, character development, writing style are concerned, you (and this story) have to be in the top 1% on this website. In other words, "There ain't much out there that's better!" I'll always cheer you on! And thank you for keeping Haru and Ran moving slow. Their tender moments make me blush and squeal like a school girl!!!

I don't know about others but I have taken to reading 2 or more chapters at a time. The suspense drives me mad otherwise. I am not much of a reviewer, I never know what to say. But I will say that I rarely read stories with second generation characters, and have never before read a story where they take so much of the spotlight. However your characters are so compelling I would probably still be reading even if the main Naruto characters were no longer in the story. Keep up the excellent work (please!!!!!).

The amount of emotion you are able to bring out of not only the characters but the reader is astounding. I have been in love with your series from the beginning and I continue to be astounded and fall even further in love with your story and the characters as things progress. I look forward to the next chapter and all others to come. Thanks again for your hard work and amazing story weaving, you have my undieing gratitude and appreciation. I sing your praises so much i have friends reading your stories now. Thanks again!

Chapter 72. *Glomps* Mannah~ *Hugs* Wooo~ Thanks for the update! Now that there's a slight change of pace, I'm dying to know what will happen! In case I miss reviewing on a chapter or two, I'm in the middle of packing and moving. Otherwise, I can't wait for more updates. Greatly appreciate your time writing the story and updating! <3333 Keep up the awesome writing!

I love this story and when I do find time to read fanfiction I read it a few chapters at a time. Don't stop it...this is one of the greatest Naruto series I have read yet and I've read several parts of it twice.

Hey,

Just wanted to let you know that I wait all week for these updates. You definitely have a core of dedicated (obsessive?) readers. Your scifi universe is so detailed and interesting. I've stopped reading/watching Naruto but I would definitely read more stuff set in this universe. I've already read your original stuff and I loved that too. Anyway, rather than gush for a year and a half, I'll just say thank you for writing and please continue. And don't kill Shikamaru (pretty pretty please?) cause I will cry like a baby.

Haru is such a sweety, I barely can <3
Such a perfect little boy ~
Wow, plaque's are a huge deal. That's intimidating. And he's only fourteen but he knows Ran a long time.
The story dynamic is wonderful!
I usually don't care for OCs and you made several of them just divine, I fell in love with them. I don't usually care for Shikamaru, but you made him my second favorite character, after Haru. At first my faves were Naruto and then Sasuke.
Um, Naruto kind of grew into Mr.Emotive perfect, even if he does still fight and misunderstand Sasuke, so I don't feel much when I think of him, though I love his presence. He's like an angel walking through space :)
Whenever Haru starts thinking frantically, I keep imagining what Ran gets tipped off with his power, and that is fun xD Haru's jealousy fits were cute and I'm glad they are over too :)
So, I feel like this story is coming to an end. Woah. And to think I left Naruto fandom and only read this story alone of it since about a year? Yeah, you are good and have me hooked! :) Thank you, dear.
I have an account, but no matter how many times I log in, I am not logged in the review section :( It confuses me and I gave up :) Have a nice weekend!