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by mannahpierce

person Lonelylulaby
schedule November 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lol, the Shika rescue had me laughing. At first I was like oh no they are 2 women against 6 men, Shika is going to be stolen. Then I was like 2 women that can kick ass. Anywho totally enjoying myself
person Lonelylulaby
schedule November 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hello again Ms. Mannah,

I know the story/saga has come to an end and it makes me sad that I wasn't along for the ride this time like all the others T_T. But I'm very surprised by my will power for staying away so long. Anywho I know I have read Ch 55 already but I have no idea where I left off so a little reread is no big deal. If nobody has said it recently I LOVE YOU AND YOUR GORGEOUS BRAIN!!!! You are truly amazing and I wish I could come up with ideas half as great. I was gifted with many talents but writing was not one of them. So for the next couple of days you will be getting reviews from me once I get to a place I have never been before. GAH I just want to go away and act like you are still writing every sat.

ja ne till next time and keep up the gorgeous brain overflow
person lonelylulaby
schedule November 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sweet Jesus, any mention of Naruto dying has me in tears Ch 56 review. Especially when it comes from Naruto himself. When he said he wouldn't be there to see Haru get his inheritance I had an idea of them putting him in stasis and waking him up to see his children grown. But I don't know if he would like that or rather be dead. It could be like 50 first dates, where he just pops in a movie and watches all the important happenings that went on

ja
person Procrastination_is_key
schedule October 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What an ending! It was good to see it from so many points of view. The sort of chapter that makes you feel all fuzzy inside :)
I'm so glad Sasuke survived- trust Rin to win the impossible cases! Tsu-chan is growing up just like Naruto- noisy!
I really like that Iruka went all 'sensei' on Sasuke. It reminded me of 'In the cold of space...'

A really great saga, I'm going to miss your updates and your writing. Good luck for the future! i look forward to anymore stories ypu write.
person Fluister
schedule October 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow. The final chapter! It has been an amazing and long journey and I know it hasn't always been easy to keep writing. But I am very glad and grateful that you saw it through and brought it to this beautiful end. I really enjoyed reading this story and it is definitely one of my favourite fictions.

Thank you for writing! And hopefully we'll be able to read more from you.
person sadie237
schedule October 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I miss reading you so much and it's been, what a week?!:) You know us junkies the first fews weeks are the hardest to kick:) SQ I'm sorry I couldn't write more for the ending chapter but I can't and I still can't! Why you ask? Well this silly girl just can't say good bye... I know it's dumb but I'm not ready yet. It's a wonderful ending and everything is perfect! I was thinking I'm going to start re-reading and by the time the new story is ready I'll be ready to start anew:) Please keep me on the list for update! I'm not big into social media. 'Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe' you have gave me such great pleasure in reading your works ~BOWING~ Thank you!
person esquisitepet
schedule September 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for a great end to this part of your stories. Best wishes to you on your original story.
person Morlana
schedule September 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I know I reviewed but I had other thoughts. Shika I felt weakened the last few chapters and haru became a much stronger character. I guess if you did write another story, the children would be the focus. If it happens I can hardly wait.
person Morlana
schedule September 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I know I reviewed but I had other thoughts. Shika I felt weakened the last few chapters and haru became a much stronger character. I guess if you did write another story, the children would be the focus. If it happens I can hardly wait.
person Morlana
schedule September 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow. It's been a while since I read. Got caught up on face book games, but I'm glad I remembered the story and got the chan e to finish reading it. You are an amazing storyteller and I appreciate you sharing with us. Reading the end makes me want to go back o he beginning so that I can revisit how this all started. I anticipate your next works. If you ever put this in paperback ill be one of the first to buy.