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by mannahpierce

person LovelyBirdCherry
schedule February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
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Haru is, Such a perfect little boy ~
Wow, plaque's are a huge deal. That's intimidating. And he's only fourteen but he knows Ran a long time.
The story dynamic is wonderful!
I usually don't care for OCs and you made several of them just divine, I fell in love with them. I don't usually care for Shikamaru, but you made him my second favorite character, after Haru. At first my faves were Naruto and then Sasuke.
Um, Naruto kind of grew into Mr.Emotive perfect, even if he does still fight and misunderstand Sasuke, so I don't feel much when I think of him, though I love his presence. He's like an angel walking through space :)
Whenever Haru starts thinking frantically, I keep imagining what Ran gets tipped off with his power, and that is fun xD Haru's jealousy fits were cute and I'm glad they are over too :)
So, I feel like this story is coming to an end. Woah. And to think I left Naruto fandom and only read this story alone of it since about a year? Yeah, you are good and have me hooked! :) Thank you, dear.
I have an account, but no matter how many times I log in, I am not logged in the review section :( It confuses me and I gave up :) Also, my review got cut off, so I'm glag I ctrl+c'ed it before hitting submit :D Have a nice weekend!
person pawtasu
schedule February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful, page-turning story that I could never, ever, ever, ever lose interest in. I look forward to every update and am so grateful that you are writing and posting! Thank you!
person Destiny
schedule February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm still here. And, I think you did a great job on the chapter so thank you for spending so much time on the story! :)
person Sessha Batto
schedule February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this world you have created. I don't have much time for reading or writing fanfic these days, but I look forward to Saturdays and a new chapter from you!! I'm woefully remiss in not reviewing, but know that I rea each and every chapter, sometimes more than once, and I appreciate your dedication to the story and your characters. Thank you SO much!
person R.e.k.less
schedule February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter!!! I've been waitig for this for soooo long!!!! I cant wait to see whats in store for Haru and Ran i love those guys!!

I also am really rooting for shika to find a love!! He deserves it so much! I know a lot of people think its gonna be Sasuke when Naruto dies but... Idk i just feel like he deserves someone who he would come first for but i have read a similar story and the "Sasuke" and "shika" characters ended up being really happy after woth no weird feelings after the "naruto" character died so i guess i have hope.

I do read this every simgle saturday because i love it (and all your other stories so much) i'm sorry indont often review but know i'm always here!!! Thanks for sharing your amazing stories with us!!!
person Silent Reader
schedule February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm the type of person who reviews a lot. But I wanted to say thank you for writing thus grand adventure. I've been reading since In the Cold of Space. I keep checking your page hoping that there's a new chapter to read like a kid on Christmas morning staring at a gift waiting to be opened. All I know is that this saga has special place in my heart surgery. Please keep writing.
person Anon
schedule February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is beautiful, and literally the only thing that keeps me coming back to this site anymore. It's fascinating to watch how such different characters all come together, without losing what makes them distinct, and to see how the litter develops into themselves. I was hesitant about Haru&Ran at first, in large part because Haru feels so young and they both have their own issues. But it's becoming such a good relationship, which sorta surprised me because this is a world where bad things do happen and there's not just an automatic happy ending and that only makes it so much better as a story.
person tanukyle
schedule February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The reason I think I don't review is mainly because I get guilty about the fact I stopped reviewing? Like I have all these feelings about chapters and every saturday I log onto my email REALLY EXCITED and go TODAY IS THE DAAAAY! But then after reading I click on the review button and then like I am all 'I haven't reviewed for ages'...'what if she goes blurrgh what kind of reader are you'...and then of course I don't review which makes the cycle worse haha.

What's even more embarassing is that I keep re-reading the whole series. So good! SO GOOD!

So yeah, hands-down this is still my favourite fanfiction of all time, despite multiple fandoms, almost ten years of reading fanfiction...I can honestly say this is my favourite. In fact forget fanfiction, this is one of my favourite BOOKS. Abhorsen, The Painted Man, In the Cold of Space you Find the Heat of Suns. This is the best thing I have ever read and the fact that week after week you keep putting it out means the world to me. A lot of the time I get really depressed, and I think what is worth living for, what small goal can I wait for? Re-reading this, waiting for the new chapter, re-reading your original works (also FEY in this chapter fff) just. You're wonderful, your writing is wonderful and I can honestly say you've saved my life more than once.
person Moonmoore
schedule February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi Mannah. It's been a while. Real life is hard and time very short. I continue to read even when not reviewing. I especially like the previous chapter. Sasuke resisted temptation. I will always be here waiting on the next installment even if I lurk. Take care and thank you for writing and sharing.

Moonmoore
person redtatsu
schedule February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love, love, love your stories!!! You are such an amazing storyteller that it boggles my mind. Please keep writing about the wonderful world that you have created. I hope it never ends :)