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by mannahpierce

schedule February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
chapter 72
First thing first (even if it was put as a last on the bottom of the page…); I have no idea how anyone who started to read this could possibly stop! It doesn’t make any sense to me… Any at all…
Yuki put up such a challenge to Kazu? Wow, he must’ve wanted to impress someone very much!

I loved the moment Naruto came to Haru’s room, what he said and the thing he did to his hair…

I can’t believe it finally happened… THAT day…
I was so touched when kits were receiving their knives…
What Kakashi said about Iruka – it was so nice to hear that. Iruka is my favourite so… Thank you.
Also thank you for putting more light to the throat mike working.
I was relieved that Haru didn’t give Ran the plaques. ( I can’t remember why did Ran cut his hair? It’s good because I thought it looked ridiculous in anime but still…. I just can’t remember. I need to do some research of past chapters.)

Once again THANK YOU for your writing, for giving your time away to please readers. It means a lot to me, because I really love this story. I hope other ungrateful readers will come around too.
person Lixx
schedule February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm still here. I am just terrible at posting comments. But I am still completely in love with your work and look forward to every chapter that is released <3
person DEATHinPINK
schedule February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi! So I'm gonna admit that you REALLY freaked me out at first with the note at the end of the last chapter. I thought it was the dreaded 'hiatus' authors note. But you didn't let me down so I'm happy. I started following this world in the very first chapter of "In the cold of space you find the heat of the sun" on FF.net. This is no longer just another story for me. You have put so much time and detail into each and every chapter that I honestly feel like this a real story about real people who exist somewhere in the universe. I know that it may seem like no one is interested or you're not getting the encouragement that you deserve but I will always be a fan! This is a story that I will remember even 10 years after you stop writing it. If you ever feel like no one is reading just remember that I log on every Saturday morning to read the new chapter. Whatever you decide to do with this story, I'll always be a fan.
Thank you for spending so much of your time to create this masterpiece for me and all the other readers! You always have been and always will be my all time favorite author:)
person eilidhdawn
schedule February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Leader gets better and better NEVER stop writing pretty please:)
person sadie237
schedule February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The 'Birth Anniversary' was wonderful! I felt like I was there ^_^
person esquisitpet
schedule February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to Saturdays because I know you will have a new chapter. I also look forward to the continuing adventures of Sasuke, Naruto & their many kids. I have read and love all your stories. You are a great writer. Happy New Year to you and your family.
person SunaoTsuji
schedule February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 71. KKKKKKKAAAAAAAAA!!!!!! I'm still excited about what will and what will not happen. With the new turn of events (which surprised me) I can't wait to see what happens! Not only that but I just realized that with the original Ran being a part of Uchiha, I forgot that Ranmaru was still there! I'm curious as to how Sasori and Ranmaru's state of being will be later in the future. Thanks very much for the update!! <<<<33333
person sadie237
schedule February 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh SQ that was so heart wenching! I loved it:) Tears ran down my cheeks. I'm with Naruto I'm proud of Sasuke. I can't imagine going threw that!! But the look big O had when he came back said it all he had to die. That bastard was so sure he had the upper hand. Plus Naruto wouldn't have been happy knowing his longer life was because of that man. No I just didn't see any other answer than the one Sasuke maded. SQ was your brain hurting after this chapter?! It was so emotional with heart and soul! You're amazing:) This 'temptation' just touched my heart so much. (She's back) Thank you for all your hard work ~Bowing~ I loved it ^_^
person satterb
schedule February 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was shocked when I read the part where Shikamaru started talking about Izuna. I wracked my brain trying to figure out how they'd learned for sure it was him. But then I realized that he'd only figured it out on his own. LOL I was worried I'd missed something. I could really picture the last scene in my head where Naruto thinks for one moment that Sasuke gave in to Orochimarus' request. LOL These kinds of chapters are touching and sweet. I look forward to more next week. Please take care, we are all cheering you on!
schedule February 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
71 - That was pretty intense.
I’m not sure what to say. When Sasuke agreed to hear him out I was angry he did. Then thought about Naruto’s life and I was angry at Sasuke for not trying hard enough to make it work. I really KNOW that it was the right thing to do but… damn!
At least I will (hopefully) have that immense pleasure of FINALLY seeing Orochimaru die! Maybe Haku has a B-day or something? That would be a nice present. I really can’t wait for that. Still, they could get some info from Kabuto, right? Lie to him that they would let Orochimaru live…..? Or the new Uchiha doesn’t lie either?