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Chapter 70. :OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OMG!!!!!!!! You've got my adrenaline pumping!!!! Woot! I'm so excited about what might and might not happen I'm tingling all over! Thanks so much for the update! I hope to read more chapters soon! Woo~! Keep up the awesome writing!

Oh how the mighty have fallen. Orochimaru knows he's in so much trouble. I love this. And I can't wait for Madara to get caught. I think it's really important that they know it's not Izuna, but in fact Madara waltzing around their compound. And the fact that he was never considered Uchiha's leader makes him one big target. I like Shikamaru having such a caring, tenderhearted side. I love this story so much, I can't wait for more, but I hate to see it come to an end. We are all cheering you on, thanks for all your hard work.

chapter 70


It’s absolutely phenomenal – this story I mean, and the way it’s so consuming and no less interesting than when it started. Apparently you have an amazing gift. At this point I’m seriously DYING to know…. Everything! I’m curious about everything! I can’t wait for more…. It’s so frustrating!!! Please, don’t do filler parts! Not now! Keep it going! Pleeeeease!
I admit that I’m not very fond of those parts in the story that are focused on the kid’s generation but it’s still always so great…. In a way it’s a waste that this story is a fan fiction but, to be honest , if it weren’t I would probably never reach it. That’s… tough. Sorry for that, I just can’t believe how good this story actually is.
Konan and Hana swearing to Uchiha… it is of course good and all but is it because they already fear for their future, about Madara leading Uchiha etc….??? Or maybe they can only swear to Sasuke? I got a bit lost in those nuances.

What does a ‘throat mike’ look like and what does it do? Is it something that lets people talk (to Sai for example) and not being heard by the people around???? …. Just curious.

Kakashi is so cool when dealing with Shika. He knows him too well!
The tension is so strained in there. How does it feel to be the one dealing cards in all this? Must be as great as tough. (Did you feel bad for killing Klennton D.? – just joking.)
Remember that with great power comes great responsibility!
I know I always say that the chapter was great or something but this one was… I’m sure you already know.
I’m sorry for such a long review. . .

Wow! Every time it appears Orochimaru will be exterminated, he finds some traction. This is so exciting! And it distracts me from wondering what has happened to the brave and noble Ranmaru.

Wonderful chapter. It is going to be interesting to see the interaction between Orochimaru and Sasori, by nature two untrustworthy men. I am not sure yet if Orochimaru will believe in this farse, but hopefully he will end giving away anyway the name of uchida's traitor, jeje.

I love how you give as in every chapter some hints of their daily family interaction.

Thanks for the hard work!

Queenie you hear me didn't you?:) I was yelling 'Whattttt' OMG!!! I was even scared with big O awake and walking around. Then he looked into the camera like that. I was thinking game over! Then the Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe laid down a cliffy like a ton of bricks:) BAMB! I LOVED it!! I want to say and it might be a little early?! My Queen is back!!!!! Making our eyes big and mouth water for more Yea Baby! ^_^

Chapter 69. Woot! Thanks for the update! I'm looking forward to the results of Sasori's sexual and mental exploits of Kabuto. The revelation of Orochimaru's accomplice is something I'm looking forward to even though I know who it is. It's the reaction from the New Uchiha that's got me worked up! Yay! Thanks so much for keeping up the updates! Greatly appreciate it. :DD

69 - That would make a good title but ....
Another great chapter! I liked the way Kakashi talked with Sasori and how Shika was so…unaware of the fact that they were talking about him. It was cute! It was also nice that he made Naruto stay with him. I hope they will hug in the next chapter. I also hope that ‘the interrogation’ has more than just two arts. It’s really interesting and exciting! And they didn’t even wake up Oro yet! I really can’t wait for more!!!!
As always THANK YOU for sharing this story with us. It’s amazing.

wonderfully written intrigue

Space Queen I loved it! Sasori-san is a girl dog huh:)! He seem to have a type something mind. The way he kept coming up with ideas on tricking Kabuto. I belive Neji-san is very jealous of the flirting of Kotohime. Shika and I needed To-chan to stay a while we feel better now:) I loved every bit of the 'Interrogation'. Shika is a great guy because I feel no pity for Kabuto. Ok maybe some of it is because of the anime to that I dislike him so much. But I liked how Shika felt pity. That's just the kind of guy he is to me. The way you have kept him threw out your stories:) Thank you for all your hard work ~Bowing~ ^_^