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by mannahpierce

person Lonelylulaby
schedule December 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG I totally forgot that Orochimaru was suppose to be waiting for the Oak in the last system...I really don't know how this is going to go. I don't even want to thing about what happened or is happening to the crew on the Sakura. I am sad but I think I will read one more chapter today. CH 22 review

ja ne till next time
person Anon
schedule December 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Apparently I can't prove I'm human...again. *sigh*

I love watching how Haru and Ran's relationship is progressing! Though I really hope that Haru gets over the jealousy issues because I don't want to think about him on his own if anything happens to Shika.

I am so glad that Sai is ok, if a bit banged up. It's nice to have him back and to see the difference in Shika and the relationship between Haru and Sumiko.

Poor Akemi! I realize the only way for him to improve psychologically is out of the tank but it must be really hard for him to be around the people who knew him before he was tortured.

Looking forward to the next chapter as always!
person SidonieStarr
schedule December 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A lovely solstice present for your readers!
person sadie237
schedule December 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! SQ that was just so beautiful:) This was a wonderful chapter for this time of year. Home and family! You're the greatest! Oh I bet you think I'm just saying that because To-chan and Papa got it on huh?!:) Well no it's not ok maybe a little:) I'm kidding. I loved what Sasuke said that if he puts the family and crew second snake man wins a little victory. Then the Yu-chan video wOw! Plus what Naruto said about him becoming a Queen with Five leading a crew. Our children have grown up. And yes it's true I had a nose bleed with To-chan and Papa in the bath and bedroom:) The hole chapter was just wonderful really! Thank you Oh Great Space Queen of Naruto Universe. This had become my favorite chapter ^_^
schedule December 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 63. Sasuke x Naruto yaoi makes a wonderful Christmas present. Thanks, Mannah. That made my day. I hope you have a Merry Christmas. And I look forward to the next chapter.
person SunaoTsuji
schedule December 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 61-62. Woot! Thanks for the update.

Work and sleep kept me away from reading. >0<

Otherwise, I can't wait to see what Centre will do and how long it will be before Ran and Haru copulate. Ha! Madara is having an internal psychological war fare he created for himself. He definitely screwed up by meeting with someone from Centre.

Patience. Well, work will keep me busy until your next update. I hope all goes well on your end! Keep up the awesome work!
schedule December 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ch. 62 - It’s so good to see that Sai really is more or less fine.
Shika’s situation scares me. I hope you won’t let the Centre to have him. I hope others won’t let it happen. I hope Garner won’t let it happen (even if just for Klenn).
I would also like to see Sai working with Shikamaru again. Maybe together they could come up with something brilliant to …. Maybe even DEYSTROY The Centre….?
Thanks for the update!
person Aflyingmonkey
schedule December 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Haru you dolt. Ah I just love him and ran so much! Can't wait for the next awesome chapter Mannah-san.
schedule December 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 62. I know it's kind of late to be saying this but I still can't believe Hinata did that to Neji. I know she had her reasons, but then I'm thinking more of canon Hinata and not this series' Hinata, if that makes sense.

Anyway, I hate to admit it but I've been in Haru's shoes before. I mean, about being jealous of someone that was close to my boyfriend. I guess that just happens in relationships. And you do have to get over that or the relationship suffers. But I like Haru x Ran. I hope they can be the next Sasuke x Naruto as far as being a legendary couple is concerned.

I'm going to shut up now. Thank you for another wonderful chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next chapter.
person sadie237
schedule December 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I believe Ran to!:) I'm feeling happier about Shika and Neji. I think they have found the right balance now. Poor Akemi. It's nice his dad is there to help him heal. Yes! Sai is back!! My personal feeling is Sai be a life saver again. Space Queen I loved it! Just another day in our growing spacers life's. ^_^