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by mannahpierce

schedule December 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Still no Sai but we're on a good way! I'm glad that Sasuke is still training. You never know what other things can happen.
But does he really have to kill Pain? He is being tortued by Orochimaru. Isn't that a punishment severe enough?
Shika was great with how fast he reacted to the message but it seems he underestimated Haru a bit...
I hope Sai is more ok than everybody thinks.
person sadie237
schedule December 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
SQ I'm still smiling at Ka-chan telling Ran to have Ha-chan watch his sisters:) This chapter is a perfect reason why I call your chapters episodes. You gave us Haur and Ran then some Sasuke and Kakashi with a little Su-chan follow with Ryuka and some Rin-san. I just loved it all! I felt like I was watching TV. Are you feeling the love for this story again?! I hope so because I love it more and more with each chapter:)!! I want my Space Queen happy:)!!! Because she sure makes me Happy ^_^
person Aflyingmonkey
schedule December 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love with Ran and Haru! :D Can't wait for the next amazing chapter Mannah-san.
person satterb
schedule December 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm really starting to feel like Haru-chan. I can't wait till they're able to get Sai back. I have faith that you will make this happen. LOL Thanks for another wonderful update. I love this story so much and my weekend is just not complete without another exciting chapter. I really hope there's a way Sasuke to nail Madara to the wall without a physical challenge, but I also think that Sasuke needs to defend his family and honor by fighting. I'm really torn, and glad I'm not the one doing the writing and deciding. LOL Thanks again.
person SunaoTsuji
schedule November 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 59. KKKKAAAAAA!! I am buzzing from the inside out and if I was a thing of some kind, I'd be static. Well, that's how I feel at the moment. So happy for the update! Thanks so much! I've started working in the wee hours of the morning and that makes taking an afternoon nap a must with early evenings trying to get back to sleep. >0< Hopefully, after the busy holidays are over I'll be able to spend more time reading. Doesn't help that I'm a gamer and an avid fan of anime and manga! Hurts a bit though since I need to save up for a new pc(borrowing my mom's) and I'm eagerly awaiting for chapter 60! Thanks so much for the hard work writing and Small Fox for the beta of the chappies! I'm going to be full of static electricity into the next update. XD
person Jrocklover
schedule November 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!! But then again i love every chapter soooo nothig new there i just want more like always. I cant wait to find ot what happens with sai!!! We need a reunion there!! And i really really cant wait till Haru is old enough to get with Ran!!! And when are we gonna find Shikamaru's soulmate?!!! I feel like its gonna be Sasuke after Naruto dies, but i dont want to think about that it makes me sad :(
person Procrastination_is_key
schedule November 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I liked how you switched between Shikamaru and Haru.
Poor Neji! I really hope that going back to the rest of the family will make him feel better rather than worse. Shika is doing a great job at being there for him. I wonder though if he has been blinded slightly by the situation with Sai? It's a little sad though that Neji hasn't picked up on Shika's worries about Centre tracking him down and harming his family. If he was feeling better, I'm sure he would be the one comforting Shika.

Su-chan is showing some of her potential which is nice. She's not always selfish. It was good to see her and Haru working together again and her telling him what to do. Definately inherited that trait from her mother, though a useful one with Haru. Kazuki raised a valid point but even though I would like to see introduced to the rest of the family, with the possibility of Centre breathing down their necks soon it is really terrible timing.

Looking forward to the next chapter, as always.
person satterb
schedule November 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm sad to see Shika losing hope. His fears are getting the best of him. I hope the prospect of finding Sai will bring him out of his funk. Thank you so very much for all your hard work on this wonderful, brilliant story. I look forward to each and every update. You bring so many people happiness with each and every chapter. Please take care of yourself till the next update!
person cynaga
schedule November 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ch 59 Outstanding story!!!
person Prettypurpletiger
schedule November 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Every other chapter we are reminded of the fact that Naruto only has a certain amount of time left. Not only that but that Shikamaru could never love anybody like he loves Sasuke. He is in love with an Idea. He didn't want Sasuke before Naruto fixed him. Is he on death watch or something? Just waiting till one friend dies so he can move in on the other? Knowing that Sasuke will never love him the way that he loved Naruto. It's creepy and starting to be annoying. Shikamaru never have Neji a chance to have his heart and Neji never have his to Shikamaru because he knew it was pointless because of how he felt about Sasuke. I am out at this point. I love these characters and love these stories but being CONSTANTLY reminded that one of the main characters is dying is rather depressing.