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by mannahpierce

person NobodysAingyl
schedule September 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh, so happy :D Thank you SOOOOO much for finishing this story! It's been so fun following Sasuke, Naruto, and the family they built along the way. My favorite stories are the ones that can make me laugh, or cry, or so angry I want to hurt the character I'm angry at, and this... This did all of that and more. I'm sad that the ride's over, but as they say, "All good things must come to an end." As for the new story, expect an email from me!
person satterb
schedule September 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I wish I could better express how much all this has meant to me. I will miss these characters, in this universe greatly. Thank you so very much for all your hard work. Your ceaseless commitment shows that this must have truly been a labor of love. Just know that it has not gone unappreciated. You will always have a loyal fan here and I look forward to reading your new story. Thanks again, and best wishes.
person satterb
schedule September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Everything happened so quickly. I'm curious about the "itch" Shika was feeling. Also, if I remember correctly, is this the first time it's been Sasuke that's injured instead of Naruto? So sad to see the last chapter is coming, but I wouldn't have missed it for all the world! Thank you for hanging in with all of us.
person Bree
schedule September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
How can there be only one more chapter left? I'm both incredibly excited and horrified. You sure you don't want to go on writing this, oh I dunno, maybe...forever?
person sadie237
schedule September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was rereading:) Ran-san is a wonderful mate for Ha-chan. I was so happy To-chan pulled a part old man:) Ok Ok enough with the pieces jokes:) I'm just sad it had to be at such a high price. Papa and Ho-chan. Which I firmly believe will make full recoveries. Ho-chan all the way. Papa may have scares but other than that he'll be fine. After all To-chan use the red label. Space Queen it's so amazing how you put this story altogether. Your ideas and imagine are brilliant! I can't say it enough the joy I have in reading your work! Thank you from the bottom of my heart for sharing it ^_^
person The horseman of death
schedule September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
best ever mannah
person Bree
schedule September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A beautiful ending. It has been quite an experience, following this story through the years and I thank you for it. I will miss it, but I look forward to what's next.
person SidonieStarr
schedule September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for a lovely tale.
person frank
schedule September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is the best story a ever read. At first did not wanted to read but wend I started with that first chapter I cold not stop reading that was 3 years ago and I glad that I disaided to read on the cold of space. I so love it and which to read you again anything u write.
P.S G.L. with everything
schedule September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the great story. I've enjoyed reading both stories and wish to be in the loop door your upcoming one. Will it be an original or continuation. I can't wait. Please let me know at dragonbetty@yahoo.com.