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Sai!!!!!!!!

Such a feel good chapter! It's so cute how both Kazuki and Ryuka are being shy over their... incident and asking Haru of all people to mediate! It's good to see the little genius out of his depth and grasping at the situation like a normal person. In fact, it seemed like a very humanising chapter for Haru. It was full of his faults and fears and his ways of working around them. It was a nice reminder that he isn't as old as his intellect would suggest. His anxiety over whether Ran would be waiting for him was very touching. And Sai is (hopefully) back! How lovely! Can't wait for the next chapter!

SQ when I read 'Lost' I got a little scared?! I think I see lost on two levels. Neji and Sai. Shika surprise me telling To-chan that he and Neji haven't gave their hearts to each other?! Ok so now it is crystal clear to me where they stand:) Sorry I was being a rock about that:) I think I was thought that in all the time they were together things had changed. You know I cracked up at the substitute Queen:) Piling up peoples plates:) Another wonderful adventure with our family. I loved it ^_^

Chapter 59. But I don't want Sai to "die". I want him to be okay and back with Haru and Su-chan. But I'll be happy with whatever you decide to do, Mannah.

Keep up the good work and I look forward to the next awesome chapter.

59 - Yes! Shika must go! And NO he should never give himself away to the Centre! Noooo!
This was exciting! I'm sure they will find Sai and I hope he's fine. It was fun to see him working on things with Haru but we didn't really see much of him collaborating with Shika. I think they would be a formidable duo!
So Shika is not in love with Neji. Thats a relief actually...
I hope Neji isn't really falling apart....
Thank you for the update!!!!!!!!!!!

Chapter 58
Kids’ chapter already?
(Somehow I had no idea that Ran called Iruka Ir-chan…. Like Kakashi.)
I can’t believe we’re closing on Orochimaru and Kabuto! It’s so exciting and makes me hopeful. I know I shouldn’t be too hopeful because I’m sure it won’t be easy and probably won’t go smooth but I hope they will get him/them… and maybe by any chance the truth about Madara NOT being Izuna will somehow transpire…..
And finally: You made me cry! SAI! Sai is back!!!! Where? How are they going to get him back?

Chapter 49-58. Woot! You've left me full of adrenaline again! I'm extremely excited to see what happens in chapter 59! Awesome awesome awesome! If I wasn't in the company of other people I'd be bouncing in my seat! Let Small Fox know that you two are amazing! Keep up the awesome writing!

I'm so thrilled that Sai will be found!!! It was touching to see Haru trying to play matchmaker. It was clear that he was completely out of his element. I'm not sure what to think about Hikaru. I was thinking he was just a little competitive with Haru out of jealousy, but it seems like there's more of a problem going on with him. Maybe I'm just reading too much into it. Lastly, I'm glad to see that Haru and Ran both feel the same way about having a relationship with Five. I agree...it would have been weird. Thank you for all your hard work on this chapter. I loved it.

Chapter 41. NO! Haku!!!!!
Chapter 42. NO! Sai!!!!!

Chapter 58. I bet it's Sai. Or some kind of message from Sai that will allow Haru to locate him.

Thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.

Chapter 43. Haku-san!!!!!!!!!!!!!!