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ch58 BRILLIANT!!! what good fun...

Ok that's not cool!!!!!!! That's the meanest clif hanger ever !!!!!! I promise I will be a good girl and review every chapter for you get me the next chapter quickly!!!! I love this story btw and I know I don't review enough but I have tasked myself with reviewing every chapter in the future if it gives you the kick you need to write more because I need more (this is purely for my own selfish interests of course lol jk) but great chapter please return to your twice a week update schedule!!!! )': i need more and I can't wait a week!!

Chapter 44-48. Woot! Kill them all! I'm also on a killing spree high with all the Uchiha. After starting to read the series and growing with the characters, I want in. Tingling all over and goose bumps prickling my skill as I reach each chapter... I'm running out of words of praise. Awesome! And it's only half of this installment? OMG! I'm eagerly waiting for updates! Thanks so much for creating, sharing and uploading your awesome stories!!!!!!

Chapter 21-40. Woot! Last I left a review it was due to story being so nerve wreaking I couldn't continue. Now with reading chappy 21-40 I've come to realize that you've kept my adrenaline high up through out those chapters. I don't think I'm going to be coming down from it any time soon. With out all the special chakras that makes Naruto and co ninjas, they've all stuck to there characters and grew with your story telling. And now, I've become so fond of Naruto and Sasuke's children as well as Haru and Sai. Now Sumiko's a really nice piece of work. Love her! I'm anticipating Sakura's continued support in the coming chapters that I'll be reading.

Definitely keep up the awesome and beautiful story! Greatly appreciate the updates and continued writing! You've really met and exceeded my expectations as a writer and story teller. AWESOME!

SQ it's Sal?!! I thought that after Ha-chan couldn't stop thinking about it. But when he went to check there wasn't anything so I thought I was wrong. Now maybe I'm right:) I loved this time with our growing kids:) Sexy Yuki huh?! Five is a goner:) So the deal is closed on Ha-chan and Ran I'm happy for them. Big brother is trying which is something else that makes me happy:) He and Haur will be fine as they get older I see it now:) The wild man Ka-chan. I was cracking up at him not taking off his helmet because he would smell her:) My baby boy Tsu-chan crying he wants To-chan I loved that! I could just see and hear it going down:) The mission was a success! Thank you for all your hard work ~Bowing~ That was all our kids in this chapter. I loved it ^_^

Sorry for not reviewing in an age!!!

So much has happened! Firstly, I'm glad Hinata has left-it was making things awkward on board. Trust Shika to be there for Neji in any way he needs it.

Klennethon Darrent’s inheritance test is an unexpected development as well, although it makes sense. It will be interesting to see if Haru will pass the test and if he will want the responsibility he is given. I'm glad that he has gotten over his guilt about Rin and the baby.

I'm very happy that there is a counter to Sasuke being taken out by Madara, though that would mean a dead Sasuke, let's hope the threat is enough to keep Izuna off Sasuke's back. I am still optimistic that Sumaru will find out he's Madara not Izuna and kill him before anything worse happens.

But why did Madara have to go involve Centre!!! Arg, he makes me so angry! I can't wait to see him fall. He is annoyingly persistent. And Shika is ready to join up just to protect Haru and his family, even though he has spent his whole life avoiding detection by Centre. It is amusing to think of perfect Centre gradually eroding from the inside and all of the Centralites running about in blind panic as things go wrong. It is tempered by the thought that they might mind-wipe Shika. Hopefully if it comes to Shika going to Centre, Garner Parrad will be able to watch out for him.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Ah, Centre finally makes an appearance. It would seem Madara is playing with fire. The story is really cooking along - can't wait for the next chapter!

CHAPTER 57
THIS CHAPTER IS BRILLIANT!!!!!!
So.. Sasuke has man’ed up a little, huh? Sexy!
I know that a lot of sometimes awful stuff happens in this story but you wouldn’t give Shika away to the Cetralites, right? I kind of worry. I’m afraid that you will let them have him , kidnap him or take him away and then fight him back… I hope I’m terribly wrong. As appealing as at looks – Shika destroying the Centre….it’s too risky and too stressing!
SHIMON HIJIRI! I didn’t expect that! He’s so hot and not properly used in the manga!!! Thank you! Are his eyes visible in here or are they covered? Never mind. He was great! It was impressive that some things finally had been said a loud and published! SHIMON was great. He showed people what the NEW Uchiha is! And even more what isn’t. It was NOT the old Uchiha! Ha! It would be so great if this whole ‘Madara-situation’ could be solved solely by politics and smart dealings rather than any fighting! I wonder if they manage that.
I also hope that Izuna’s name will be cleared afterwards. That makes me wonder what about Pain and Kabuto….?
What happened to Shimon in the past? Why didn’t Akatsuki kill him and they even would????????
I hope we’ll see more of him.
SUMARU – wow! I didn’t expect that of him! I thought he was too… formal to send a message like that.

And to end it optimistically – Kazuki ripping Madara’s head off is a nice thought!

THAK YOU! This was…more than good! It’s everything I’ve been waiting for since some time now and MORE! Can’t wait till Saturday!

AAaaah, they can't let Center take Shika away! Even though it would be good to see Shika destroying Center from the inside out, I don't want him separated from the family! I don't think he'd survive that..
It's good to see Madara feeling more and more cornered though. It's going to be a surprise for him to discover the 'real' rules about the children challenging him!

Another amazing chapter. I really loved reading it and I hope it'll get easier for you to write them. Thankyou for the update.

Poor Shika life is just plain rough for a type-seven genius. Madara, oh how I loathe thee, it was pretty funny though to imagine him going after Sakura and Sumaru being there instead. Another fantastic chapter, thanks for the updates! I am looking forward to more.