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I loved it that Madara was called a "fossil"!!!! I almost peed my pants! But in reality he's very dangerous. I don't think I could stand it if Shikamaru was taken by Centre. Please protect him. Or even better, please let him get even with them for the threat to his self and loved ones. I sooo look forward to another update, no matter when you're able to get to it. Thanks for updating when you can.

SQ it was 'priceless' when old man broke the TV! That's a Yea Baby if there ever was one:) I get so in sensed when that fossil thinks he can just appear and take over!! You see how much I like his new name Fossil:) That was all so brilliant! SQ you get better and better. Then the smooth way Sasuke and Shika found out about the meeting with central. Was another stroke of genius my Space Queen:) That news reporter read my mind on the Fossil. You know I knew I was in good company when Naruto was laughing at it to:) My love for To-chan just keeps on growing:) Buying gifts of everyone! That's so sweet! Plus the love of his life lets him do it:) SQ I truly enjoyed every word. Hey thanks for fining time to write with work and all:) I don't think I could make it without a Saturday episode:) No Wednesday is painful but do able. But a missed Saturday would KILL me ^_^

Chapter 57. Damn that Madara. Just when Sasuke and Shikamaru get ahead of him, he does something or plots something that puts him in the lead again.

Thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.

56 - Oh Gods! So any important information in one chapter! …wow…
First things first: Naruto really was getting turned on by breasts before his bonding, Does that mean that Kazuki is not necessary straight or is it just my wishful thinking? He acts straight… Naruto was acting bisexual….

Garner!!!!! I was SO hoping to see him! That was much more than I expected!
The ending was… hard. You never let Naruto say anything like that before… I thought there will be smut and there was the most terrifying moment of the whole story….
I can’t help but wonder if Naruto will die fighting or of the old age…
Thanks for the update!

Very deft. I love how the pace of the thing changes with one elliptical little line from Garner San and suddenly we're hurtling down the slope of pursuit, all caught up in the thrill of the chase again. Haru as Master of the Universe, huh? Always knew it was a heritable position (what else for the virtual love child of Shika and Darent?) Kazuki vs Izuna!

Chapter 56. Leave it to Shikamaru to find a solution to their problems. And the ending was sweet and very true. Naruto will never leave them.

Anyway, thanks for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.

Ok Queenie I have tears in my eyes and I feel like crying a river:) I just like Sasuke don't like to talk about To-chan not being around. I know that's life and we all have to go but SQ knowing that Naruto will go without Sasuke and before him some how gets to me. I'm going to TRY to stop being sensitive to that fact. I was speechless although I shouldn't have been at Kleen leaving all that to Haru. I have a better understanding of Neji and Shika relationship. After Shika told Haku-san. I didn't realize that Itachi was still so formal?! I don't think there could be a better name for this chapter than 'Rules':) I do like Garner for some reason. So I was laughing and jumping with Sasuke and Shika all thanks to Garner:) O Great Space Queen I loved it! ^_^

Sorry, but I'd still like to see Madara beheaded. Or having one of the kits rip his throat out would be nice too. LOL Thanks for updating. I love your work and look forward to each and every update!

55 - I thought that Oro-print would take the baby and kill Rin. It was smart of him to secure his child’s future like that… Impressive. And Rin – her comparison of the child to Sasuke… brilliant! It’s good that she believes that her daughter will grow up right but in the future with Madara as a leader of Uchiha…. I don’t know.
I really hope they’ll find Sai soon… or that Sai will somehow find them… Who knows what he’s up to. And no, I don’t consider his death anymore. He’s out there. He has to be. All this searching can’t be for nothing.
I hope Shika will not take Neji back so easily!
I wonder about what did you change in the previous chapter….? I will have to check sometime around because I think I’ve read it just after it showed in my e –mail…..
Saturday on.y updates – it’s still wonderfully often and regular.
You’re great!
Thanks for the update!

I love that the young ones can feel like they can act now and ask forgiveness later! LOL And it's good to see that Hi-chan is trying to make Ha-chan feel included. I loved this chapter and look forward to the next. I understand the need for adjusting the amount of updates for the time being and am grateful for what I can get. It also prolongs the story...LOL As always, I look forward to more. Your wonderful writing puts a smile on my face every time I see an new post.