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Chapter 55. Don't worry about the posting, Mannah. Work comes first because you get paid to do that. Post when you can.

I'm glad Rin had that talk with Haru. And Ka-chan obviously has feelings for Ryuka.

Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter, and I look forward to the next update.

(Smiling) I loved it! It was a day in the life of our family of Uchiha's:) Tsu-chan running around. Rin-san seem to be taking being a mother very well. I'm glad:) What Haru said was really profound. All the meanies trust them to help raise their kids. I like how he said it:) Thank you for the heads up on no Wednesdays. I would have looked and went right into panic mode:) SQ I enjoyed the boys chat about what's going on with Ka-chan to. My 'assumption' was that Rin-san wouldn't keep the baby but I'm happy she's happy! ^_^

I started reading "In the Cold of Space" two weeks ago and have blown through everything you have written in the series. I just finished the last chapter of "Leader" today. I am hooked on the universe you have created with these characters. The depth of detail is amazing, and the character development is so very detailed. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Ah, another baby. I know you are fond of them. Since you are also fond of making your little girls evil, or at least narcissistic, I wonder if there's any hope for Orochimaru's genetic daughter. Perhaps Teruko and Takara will favor their horrible grandfather (not that you will create the story that far out, but it's fun to think about).

Sasuke seems to be sailing into yet another trap. I still hope for Ranmaru's resurrection; your recent mention of Sasori and description of Ran's new hairstyle have made me wonder. I look forward to next Saturday's installment!

Just a quick post to say i am still hear and reading and love your work!

I'm pissed that Neji is so heartbroken, but I also wonder if he maybe feels just a little foolish looking. I'm so glad Hinata is out of the way though! Lol Thank you for the wonderful chapter. Naruto and Sasuke talking about Ran and Haru made me smile. Haru is so worried that Ran doesn't feel the same way he does, but everyone else can see that Ran loves Haru. Funny how we can never see clearly when we are too close to the situation. Because Ran is an empath may be the only reason he isn't as concerned as Haru is. I look forward to the next installment.

Oh wow, that was low! I can't believe Hinata actually did that to Neji. Not that I was fond of the idea of her being Neji's partner, but damn. Poor Neji, I think he never broke down like that. And also poor Shika, he's loyal to a fault, even though I think it's sweet that he went to comfort Neji.

Whew.. I really wonder how things will develope from now on!

54 - Oh GOGDS, why SHika always has to be so irritatingly perfect.... I don't want them to be together again. I alway wanted for SHika something better and often wondered what it could be. SOmetimes I thought about Sasuke, but SHika would never be the most important to him. It would always be Naruto no matter alive or dead, and Shika deserves to b first , the most important to someone who deserves it, who ... I don't know. He deserves more than Neji (who was cheating on him!)
Shika acted so cool! He's amazing.
And I TOTALLY LOVE that moment when he considered destroying Hyuugas - one of the most influential and important clans in the whole Universe - just becuse one of them had hurt his friend/family. That was awesome! Not that I want him to do it or anything. Just that it was amazing what he would do for the people he cares about.
.....I can't wait to see Garner when he will take tha ship back (I mean if I see him...) He's my second candidate to Shika's heart but he would probably never to anything like that. He loved Klenn, right? Neji would never be everything to him either....
Oh, well... THANK YOU for the update. The last chapters were really great(with the slightly less amout of kid's problems)
Till Saturday then!

Oh hell no! No She didn't! Neji is just going to let her do that to him and leave line that? Place his relationship with Shika in ruins just so she could get pregnant? She could have e plainer the situation to Neji and they could have made the decision together. The situation did make Shika realize his much Neji meant to him but this was just low. I say Tank her till its time to deliver and then send her back to Hyuga with two out if three. Neji deserve to be a dad too. That was a special kind if evil. To think that she had the nerve to tell Shika to trust her, she had neji's best interests at heart a little while ago. She had her best interests at heart. There was no obstacle preventing her from telling the truth. Everyone would have seen the logic behind it. The deception was just "unkind".

Chapter 54. I can't say I will miss Hinata when she returns to Hyuga. It's just a shame that she caused Neji and Shikamaru to break up.

Thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.