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by mannahpierce

schedule October 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
52 - Aaaaaaaah... nice. They're finally moving forward, they have a plan, they settling things.... I like that! I always like when they're planning something, especially SHika.
Now, what about Neji? Was he really forced into this relationship with Hinata? I admit I didn't pay her and Naji enouhg attention earlier and now I'm kind of lost. I don't know what to think. What Neji said to Shikamaru sounded like a cry for help....
Sumiko was pessimistic. I would say: If they could find the biwa then there is a chance to find Sai too! Although I don't know how big was Sai's box...
I like it when things are moving forward. THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE!
person eunmook
schedule October 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah, blessings. Things look up whenever they pause to reconsolidate. All the things that do not change, that cannot change, that keep them who they are, and keep all of us coming back for more. Lovely...and a nice transition from the pace of the interludes back to reality.
schedule October 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 52. Wow! That was definitely a surprise for Neji (the one from Hinata) wasn't it? I guess that ends any hope of Shika and Neji getting back together.

I am glad Haru found Sasuke's biwa. Now, if they could find Sai, everything would be almost okay.

Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.
person Slynx
schedule October 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
As much as I loved the interludes, I love reading from Shika's pov again! Poor guy, he really needs someone to love him, even though he's still holding up. And I want to know what Hinata is up to! There has to be something... Hmmm. Well, I guess I won't find out until I read more of the story! Amazing chapter, again, and looking forward to reading the next!
person sadie237
schedule October 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
SQ this has to be the most people you have ever had in your computer room:) That was awesome! It was a 'blessing' that Papa's biwa was unharmed. I loved how all the kids got together when it was found:) Well well well what is going on with Neji and partner huh?! It's a mystery still? Apparently even from Neji:) I look forward to seeing what Hinata has up her sleeve?! Hi-chan was in charge. Our kids are growing up right in front of us:) Haku and his family is back in Tarrasade? I'm glad Kiba partner decided to join him. Thank you SQ I loved it! See you next episode ^_^
person Slynx
schedule October 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love these interlude chapters. It's refreshing to read other characters pov, although I have to admit that I love those of who are on the Renaissance the most. And can I just say that I actually feel really sorry for Pein? I know he was a misguided bastard, but I do hope he'll be saved of allowed to die.
schedule October 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
51 - It was fun to read about ninkens. I just can’t imagine how are they supposed to look as more human than dogs… Someone should draw it to help my imagination.
Ryuka and Ryuu… yea that’s … matching. I liked her reaction to Naruto.
(Tayuya and Inari were hugging and kissing Iruka, right?)
Kabuto – the freak… too smart for his own good. I hope Orochimaru will kill him.
Oro – I hope Kabuto was bluffing with the cells, but it’s probably too much to hope for. I wonder what would Orochimaru do if he got his sleazy hands on the one and only original Baara hybrid? And finally, it would be so nice if he somehow revealed the truth of Madara’s identity. It’s outrageous how that bastard dirtied his brother’s name.
Pein – does he like pain? …that wasn’t as funny as I thought it would be… He’s a bit like Prometheus now…
ps. Will we see Garner-san any time soon? Now that Klenn is dead I’m curious about him…


person greeneyedcat
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love the girl. I think it will be good for the kits to have a girl like them around. I want to know what animal she is :-)
person satterb
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another wonderful chapter. I'm dying to see the history of Orochimaru and Madara. This chapter gave a little taste. I've been wondering for awhile now. I feel sorry for Pein. I really hope there's a way to save him. I look forward to the next chapter as always. Thank you for all your hard work!
person sadie237
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
SQ I was rereading the 'Interludes'. I truly loved all three! Being with Iruka-sensi again. My second true love Tsuneo-chan:) I have a happy mother smile on face when I read him:) He's just like his To-chan in that he wanted to make Shika smile. Then there was the way Itachi was feeling after he saw the fluffy soft Naruto. He would like for Haku to look at him that way. That touch my heart. I remember the past he has with Haku-san which is way I think it touched me more. And of course Ryuka-kun when all the bells and whisles went off at see the real Naruto. Knowing she was in the presents of the Greatest Space Clan! Wow that was just wOw! I just had to touch base with you. Thank you for sharing your wonderful imagination with us ^_^