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by mannahpierce

person sadie237
schedule October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! As always I love the twist you put in like with Ino-san. I think assassin is perfect! You got my blood pumping thinking maybe the Sister hood might get the old man before Sasuke-sama has to fight him. I'm not saying Sasuke can't win in a fight with him but no fight is 100% safer:) With all that's on the line for new Uchiha Sasuke-sama with that on his shoulders could win! I'm having evil thoughts: wouldn't it be something if a lesser statics person killed that old sucker!:) SQ I totally enjoyed knowing what's going on with these comrades. I was off work today so I'm reading early yea baby for me ^_^
person Procrastination_is_key
schedule October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow! I feel so spoilt!
Iruka, Itachi and Neji?!?!? Tsuneo was a treat as well-its been a while since we've had that type of child's perspective. Naruto's was slightly scary-I'm not sure i would want him planning my love life so methodically. But it was interesting to see his appraisal of Hinata.
It was good to see how the past events have affected other members of the crew as opposed to just progressing with the storyline. I love seeing how the characters think, and this chapter was full of it!

Am thoroughly looking forward to the next Interlude :)
person satterb
schedule October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved the interlude. It's almost restful after all that's just happened. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Thank you for all your hard work.
person Slynx
schedule October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love this interlude. Even though I'm dying to know what's going to happen next, I really enjoy reading all these small pieces from everyone's point of view. I am so glad Haku has Kisame and Itachi with him, he really needs some love and care. I'm also really starting to wonder what is going on with Neji. Something definitely is not right, but I can't tell what yet! I also really loved Tsuneo's part. He seems to have inherited his fondness of Shikamaru from his To-chan. It was nice seeing the world from the child's eyes.

Well, amazing writing and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
person Procrastination_is_key
schedule October 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A vendetta, eh?
Sounds good! Especially the part about just slitting Madara's throat, however hypothetical, made me smile. Also it was nice to see Sasuke's support of Shika in this chapter too.
Madara's reaction to it as well was very pleasing. I like the idea of being able to play outside the Spacer code rules.

A good set up for thw next part of the story.
I have found it a joy to read so far and i am intrigued as to what the Interlude will entail. I look forward very much to reading the next chapter. :)
schedule October 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 49. I had missed fluffy soft Naruto. I loved Itachi's reaction to seeing Naruto in that state.

Haku never has it easy, does he?

And how I wish that Neji and Shikamaru would get back together.

Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the second of the Interlude chapters.
schedule October 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
short and sweet smut. as always very good although i cant see konan and shika. i always see shika as gay...
person Aflyingmonkey
schedule October 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved this! Especially Naruto and Itachi's parts. Can not wait for more, Mannah-san. :D
person sadie237
schedule October 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Space Queen that was so beautiful! I think we all needed this chapter to get back in touch with our family. I didn't know how much I missed everyone. Putting the pieces of their lives together in the aftermath. The Neji issue is a tough one. I'm falling in love with Itachi of course I wasn't that far from it:) You helped me fall over the edge:) I love how his and Haku-san agreement is to make Kisame happy. Because they hold that so seriously and dearly to their hearts. My sweet Tsu-chan crawly in bed with Papa and To-chan but only after listening to make sure no noises were heard:) Tsu-chan sisters and Iruka-sensei along with a horny Kakashi. You know what my favorite part was?!:) The soft AND the growling Naruto with his sexy beast of a mate Sasuke 'YeaBaby' Thank you SQ it was a heavenly chapter ^_^
schedule October 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM

This is great! It’s like a pause to look at each and every one, to sum up things…. We needed a bit of that insight.
IRUKA – I love to read about him, especially (but not necessarily) with Kakashi. I’m glad to see that Kakashi is still so fond of him.
ITACHI – I really wanted to know how he’s going! Thank you for showing that he is able to deal with what had happened to Haku so… good. Itachi seeing ‘Fluffy’ was… amazing. Don’t ever let us forget how breathtaking Naruto is. It’s been so long since someone reacted to him that way. It was nice to see.
NEJI – always a distaste…
I wonder if you have a romance for Shika hidden there somewhere in the future? I don’t like to think of Neji as his only long term partner. Neji was disappointing from the start to the end... I know it’s not the end yet, but if he’s not going to… I don’t know.. DIE for Shika, then nothing will help my opinion on him. So… will Shikamaru fall in love? With Garner? He’s not Klenn bbut he surely is 100 times better then Konnan! Or someone else?
NARUO – brilliant and special , as ever. AND FINALLY SOME SMUT!!!!
That was just perfect. Thank you! Since this chapter is called ‘on the Renaissance’ then the next will be from somewhere else, huh? From Terrasade probably… or maybe form the last two hostages…?
Can’t wait to see.