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by mannahpierce

person SidonieStarr
schedule October 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Lost your review because I couldn't prove I was human. Again. Dammit.

Ah, well .... Interlude .... I knew it! A chance to check in with others' POV (other than your four designees, that is) without hopelessly complicating the story. Neji is still a cipher, though. I don't remember you using Tsuneo's POV before. The triplets' growing up reminds the reader of Naruto's remaining life expectancy. Of course, Sasuke is too busy trying to keep everyone alive to worry about it at the moment.
person satterb
schedule October 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I can't effin wait. I think Madara is a little afraid...mwahhahaha! I am so looking forward to finding out what happens next. Thank you so much for all your hard work. Your writing is amazing!
person Fluister
schedule October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, this is only the first half of the story! Haha, wow, you really are building up to something. It's awesome. I love the vendetta and can't wait to find out what will happen next. I understand the need for an Interlude and I also hope that you will also get some joy from writing and not just have to labour through it. It really is an amazing story and you always have me on the edge of my seat whenever a new chapter is posted!
Amazing work as always <3
person Rhionae
schedule October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Thank you for sharing.
schedule October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 48. Ha ha! Take that, Madara!

This "interlude" you spoke of in your author's note intrigues me. I wonder what you have up your sleeve, Mannah.

Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.
schedule October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow! A vendetta! It's so cool! I can't wait!
Shika in his 'creative mode' was as great as ever!!!
Finally everything's turns to the right path again.
I wonder what you planned for the next three chapters. Is it going to be something lie Tales from Terrasade? or maybe from kids' point of view...? Or mabe three chapter of fluff and smutt?
I can't wait to see!!!!
Thank you for the First part, for not stoping you writing, for being patient and for working so hard for our pleasure.
Never stop! THANK YOU!
person Moonmoore
schedule October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow!
That chapter was extrordinary from start to finish! I am so psych! Adreline is rushing and imploding in my bloodstream. I love when Sasuke behaves like this. I love this trait in him. It was awesome! I can't wait to read more about this! More soon please!
person Aflyingmonkey
schedule October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Now this is exciting! I'm so stoked for the vendetta in place and Madara maybe slipping up. Can not wait for the next part Mannah-san! :D
person sadie237
schedule October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It sadden my heart to here it was taken more than love to write. I love reading you so much! I HOPE you can get back to loving writing this story again:) I was on the edge of my seat reading! The meeting was great. Shika was his old self again:) I was almost surprised at he (only) gave up one bank account. I should have guessed that man has lots of bank accounts:) I bet old man had the Master Card look on his face when Sasuke was on TV, you know the look 'Priceless':) I was love-in it! I look forward to your 'declaration' of our Interlude:) I got that in pertty nice didn't I?!:) Space Queen I adore you and reading your stories is one of the pleasures of life for me:) Thank you sharing another wonderful episode ^_^
person SidonieStarr
schedule October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A vendetta! What a thrill! I am sorry that writing the story has, as you report, lost its thrill. If it's any consolation, your writing still feels fresh and you are, as usual, full of surprises.