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by mannahpierce

person InuChic
schedule October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You are a goddess I've never read something that pulled me in so completely.
schedule October 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
47 - I love the last words. NEW Uchiha is so much more than the old Uchiha! This chapter was so nice and relaxing. It makes me worried that it's just a calm before the storm. But that's what life is about, right?

Thank you for Iruka-moents! I love it even if he just is, but here he said something, like he suspected something about Sai. He probably deducted it from Shi-chan and Haru's behavior... nice.
Naruto AND Iruka in one scene - too cute! I loved it so much.

Hikaru - I kind of even missed him. I wonder if he is interested in someone like Haru in Ran....?

I know that RIn does not deserve to die but I think it would be better then having to live after being with Orochimaru print and having his baby....

Now I hope Haru will find Sai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person satterb
schedule September 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for another wonderful update! Naruto will never let his children have hard feelings against one another. This was a really sweet chapter. I'm also glad that Su-chan is becoming more mature. She was a little insufferable when she was really young. I look forward to more.
schedule September 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 47. I can't speak for everybody else, but I love chapters where the children are the main focus. They are such a big part of the series, and I had missed them during all the excitement. It was a nice reunion.

Anyway, I don't want to say anymore in order to avoid spoilers, so I'll end here. Thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.
person Aflyingmonkey
schedule September 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
D'awww BABIES ALL REUNITED!! I love Haru and Ran's relationship! Another amazing chapter Mannah-san, can't wait for the next one. :D
person sadie237
schedule September 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
To know To-chan is to love him. I love him more all the time:) That is a great way to get the brothers together. The title is so fitting for this chapter:) The best breakfast in space is cooked by Iruke-sensei:) I'm so happy Haku-san was busy!! You know I didn't really think about the height of the kids until Kiba-san had to bend to hug Ha-chan. Little sister has grow-up a lot. It made me smile when she told Ha-chan he doesn't tease people. I'm going to just enjoy them all being together. No thoughts of what's to come for me. I know I'm chicken:) Our family is all in one piece that's enough for now ^_^
person cynaga
schedule September 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ch 46&47 beautiful!!!
person v
schedule September 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have to tell you that I cried through this entire chapter. Reunion was an apt name for it because I feel each line of it was so emotionally charged. I will admit that Haru is my favorite of the children, probably because I've gotten to know him the best but also because he's the one that lives so much in his mind and is the most vulnerable. His worry about Sai, his response to Kiba, his explanation on why he agrees that they should stay out of the battle for now, it was all so painful...I couldn't say how I expected this chapter to go, but I should of learned by now that where ever they're going, you know exactly how to get them there. BRAVO!! v
person SidonieStarr
schedule September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's amusing how Shikamaru is manipulating Sasuke into unknowingly searching the entire system for Sai. Seems like that would fall under "important stuff" that Sasuke should know. Probably won't improve Sasuke's mood when he inevitably does learn about Sai.
schedule September 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the story. Please continue. Is shika your favorite character? He seems to be your main character more than sasuke and naruto. It would be nice if there was a fight for naruto's love/companionship. sasuke won naruto's love too easily for me.