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by mannahpierce

schedule September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic, absolutely fantastic! I was worried that Sasuke wouldn't survive after all and it would be such a devastating twist after all the worry for Naruto, but that was a great ending! Looking forward to the epilogue later on this year/next year. Thanks for everything you do you are an amazing author!
person melissen
schedule September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU!
Thank you so very much. Not just for sharing this story but for this happy ending. It was killing me. I was really afraid that you may want to remind us that sometimes life sucks and that’s the reality. But we all know that already and read ff to see something else. You gave It to us all and I really can’t express how grateful I am.

The time I spent on reading this story, o thinking about it, or waiting for every update, it was all…. Truly unforgettable. I guess I just HOPE you know how I feel.
I also hope you meant it when you mentioned about something more as a Christmas present for us all. I can’t wait.
This story was amazing. It was your world and feel truly privileged to be able to get access. Thankyou once again.
Just so you know – I cried reading this one. Tsuneo – that gorgeous little thing…. He did it!
Iruka - I swear he’s like a nanny for them all.... He made it. They managed to keep it all together long enough.
„Shi-chan missed Papa more than To-chan did” – I always thought he loved Naruto the most…. ?
Damn, I will miss it so much… But I guess every journey has its end… Is it here already? ………
………….Until we meet again.

person sadie237
schedule September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm trying not to cry:) I thought I would be better not as sad but hey it didn't work!:) I'm so happy at how the story ended! I'm crazy sad because I'm going to miss you and our family and crew:) For give me for now and I'll write more later ^_^
person Lixx
schedule September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
<3 I am so sad this is over! I can't believe that I have been following this story since 2009. You are a fantastic writer! Thank you so much for sharing this story with us. I wish you all the luck writing your original piece!
schedule September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 106-107. Aw~ It is sad to see this story end. I'm excited for the epilogue though! Excited, excited! Awesome way to end chapter 106 and 107. Not spoiling anything here.
schedule September 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, intense last couple chapters. Glad for the end of Madara but im pulling for Sasuke to recover. As always thanks for giving me an escape from real life and a glimpse of your creative genius!
person melissen
schedule September 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
But please, oh PLEASE let Sasuke recover. Please. Don’t do this to Naruto. Yes, this was an unexpected turn of events and I’m sure none of us had seen it coming few weeks ago, but don’t do this to Naruto. Just don’t….
person sadie237
schedule September 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
SQ I'm sorry I'm late. Of course overtime would be today of all days:) The after affects have crashed in on my happy happy joy joy. Papa so badly hurt. I just didn't think of what a laser gun could do. Thank goodness Ho-chan will be alright. But I'm really scare and worried for Papa. Can I just say Holly Lula old man is gone may he rest in pieces I mean peace:) I love To-chan so much I'm so happy he was able to pull his self together and join everyone for dinner. Even in his wildest mode he gave them the red hype spray yea baby:) Shika is still full of surprises:) Hold the phone Neji and Ho-chan what???!:) I'll gave Kakashi a wink for going over and saying something to Sumaru-san. That was very nice of him. SQ our poor boys soon as one gets out of the tank the other goes in! Of course I think ok and hope that Papa will be alright! Space Queen I loved it!! Thank you for all your hard work. I'll be tune in Saturday for the next episode ^_^
person Moonmoore
schedule September 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Tears all thru the chapter. I can't imagine you being able to close all loose ends and gives a happy ending with both Sasuke and Hoshi being recovered enough to be let out of the tank. I just hope with all my might that this does not end open ended or worse in a tragedy. I don't think I could bear it after all the time spent with all the characters. They are like relatives that I don't get to see but love none the less. Please, let them survive.

I think I need to leave and visit again when the next chapter is been uploaded. I feel awful. You are that good.

Thanks once more for your awesome work and see you soon for the finale.

Sincerely

Moonmoore
person Kat Saama
schedule September 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
My heart is still racing after reading the last 10 chapters together. Mannah_Pierce you truly know how to tell a story. I can't believe it's nearing the end, I'm not sure I'm ready for this story to end to tell you the truth! I don't even know what to say I'm still in shock about everything that has happened in the last few chapters... AMAZING as always!