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September 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I guess the shit is about to hit the proverbial fan! I almost forgot about Izuna. I can't wait to see all of this come together. It's been a wonderful story. I'm going to miss it, but it's all about the journey right? I am in awe of how you've strung all the events together. You are such an awesome storyteller. I look forward to the next installment. Thank you for all your hard work!
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September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 46. It's good to have everything almost back to normal, at least for the time being. I would love to see Haku give that Orochimaru print a good slash with a knife. Although, I would still like Kisame or Itachi to give him a good beating first. ^-^
I wasn't sure how Haru would take the news about Sai. I hope Sai is still out there somewhere, and they can bring him back. But I won't get my hopes up too high in case that isn't impossible.
I'm really looking forward to the big confrontation with "Izuna".
Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.
I wasn't sure how Haru would take the news about Sai. I hope Sai is still out there somewhere, and they can bring him back. But I won't get my hopes up too high in case that isn't impossible.
I'm really looking forward to the big confrontation with "Izuna".
Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.
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September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
46 – GREAT CHAPTER!
Uuuum…. Who’s Miriam? … Nevermind.
I would be delighted if Haku were the one to kill Orochimaru. He has it in him to do it right. Kisame would do it too quickly but Haku… he would be marvelous! With Rin’s ‘medical’ help/knowledge it might be veeeeeeery interesting. I hope it will happen eventually.
(In one sentence somewhere where Sasuke bows to Haku there is a switched letter and it says that Haru bows back.)
Haru- still believing in Sai’s chances… Naruto’s son alright!
I think Sai would be someone very special for Shika, he had so much knowledge and the way of thinking that Shika would like. I know that it was probably more like Haru’s because Shika’s is… to special, brilliant or whatever… unique! But still, I believe that Shika and Sai would be a formidable duo.
IRUKA – it’s always so… special when he appears. Too bad that his part is so small recently. I used to thought he would become a teacher or Haru’s tutor (or at least something like that had been suggested some…long time ago) and then he practically was out of the picture… and Kids took over the story…
AKEMI – it’s hard to cry that he’s missing when we practically didn’t know. Wonder what kind of person is he? A troublemaker like Asuma in his youth and Kono? BUT still when Sasuke says that there is no point on dwelling if he’s alive was harsh…. Or maybe I misunderstood….
Sasuke saying “over my dead body” was great!
Now I think Izuna shold get into Naruto’s hands. He is Shi-chan’s best friend and if there was any challenge or something he could always represent Sasuke, right?
This chapter was just…. GREAT! (even though I thought thee would be smutt after finding the kids….)
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Uuuum…. Who’s Miriam? … Nevermind.
I would be delighted if Haku were the one to kill Orochimaru. He has it in him to do it right. Kisame would do it too quickly but Haku… he would be marvelous! With Rin’s ‘medical’ help/knowledge it might be veeeeeeery interesting. I hope it will happen eventually.
(In one sentence somewhere where Sasuke bows to Haku there is a switched letter and it says that Haru bows back.)
Haru- still believing in Sai’s chances… Naruto’s son alright!
I think Sai would be someone very special for Shika, he had so much knowledge and the way of thinking that Shika would like. I know that it was probably more like Haru’s because Shika’s is… to special, brilliant or whatever… unique! But still, I believe that Shika and Sai would be a formidable duo.
IRUKA – it’s always so… special when he appears. Too bad that his part is so small recently. I used to thought he would become a teacher or Haru’s tutor (or at least something like that had been suggested some…long time ago) and then he practically was out of the picture… and Kids took over the story…
AKEMI – it’s hard to cry that he’s missing when we practically didn’t know. Wonder what kind of person is he? A troublemaker like Asuma in his youth and Kono? BUT still when Sasuke says that there is no point on dwelling if he’s alive was harsh…. Or maybe I misunderstood….
Sasuke saying “over my dead body” was great!
Now I think Izuna shold get into Naruto’s hands. He is Shi-chan’s best friend and if there was any challenge or something he could always represent Sasuke, right?
This chapter was just…. GREAT! (even though I thought thee would be smutt after finding the kids….)
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
PLOT! YES! OMG THEY GONNA FIND MADARA!!!! I'm so happy the children are back with sasuke and naruto. I can not wait for the next chapter Mannah-san. :D
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September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
“Who provided the drug? And how in known space did he get it into the household?” i did not think about that. you could writes mysteries.sorry i havent reviewed in a while but i do read each and every chapter u put up. i love your stories.
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September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OH Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe ~Bowing~ That was so incredible!!! I got a little misty eyed when Naruto was talking with the Toad kids:) Of course To-chan would make them feel comfortable:) Then he carried Kichi back to his room that was so sweet. Drum roll! Haku-san is the Queen of the Renaissance that was wonderful of Sasuke-sama to do that. I definitely approve:) Then Shika cryed in Iruka-sensi arms and got his tea and toast. He will always be the Mother to all queen or not. SQ I could write a chapter on everything I loved about this chapter:) So I going to say I loved EVERY word you wrote:) Thank you for all your hard work. I can't go without saying 'next' had me going I didn't know what to expect?! But oh how I loved it ^_^
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September 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another fantastic last two chapters!!!!
I'm so happy the family is back together! And very happy the big litter got off the Sakura before the print exploded it.
I like the flashes of ruthlessness you get from Haku. They are always unexpected and yet so very Haku. I wouldn't like to ever be on his bad side.
I glad that Shika has been able to tell Haru about Sai- at least someone knows whats going on with him. Although going by the the last scene in chapter 46, the others are catching up with Shika's current state of mind.
And Kakashi and Iruka are back! Whoop whoop!
Full steam ahead for the next chapter! :)
I'm so happy the family is back together! And very happy the big litter got off the Sakura before the print exploded it.
I like the flashes of ruthlessness you get from Haku. They are always unexpected and yet so very Haku. I wouldn't like to ever be on his bad side.
I glad that Shika has been able to tell Haru about Sai- at least someone knows whats going on with him. Although going by the the last scene in chapter 46, the others are catching up with Shika's current state of mind.
And Kakashi and Iruka are back! Whoop whoop!
Full steam ahead for the next chapter! :)
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September 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ch 45 HA! Hurray!!!!!! *big grin*
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September 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
chapter 18. You're wonderful with churning the plot to the climax and I'm going to read Jason because I'm postponing reading how Leader's going to continue in chapter 19.
My stomach is tingling just typing this.
I knew right away that Izuna Uchiha's role was gonna be... hard to integrate into the story without there being a hidden motive. Now to find out that Madara had done a switch with Izuna really got me fired up.
Considering that I've got more to read..... I so wanna know what happened to Izuna!
My stomach is tingling just typing this.
I knew right away that Izuna Uchiha's role was gonna be... hard to integrate into the story without there being a hidden motive. Now to find out that Madara had done a switch with Izuna really got me fired up.
Considering that I've got more to read..... I so wanna know what happened to Izuna!
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September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Whooooooooooooooo! Don't mind me while I do a little victory dance! *dancedancedance*