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by mannahpierce

schedule September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ch 45 - Thatnk you, thank you... Gods... I really thank you! I knew they would survive but still.... I was afraid that you wiould keep the news from us for a few more chapters and move to Madara instead or something... I really can't wait to see them all rip the original Orochimaru apart, very, very, slowly.
schedule September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 45. I was worried there for a second when Itachi didn't show up, but I'm glad everything worked out for the children.

Thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.
person sadie237
schedule September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! Some of our family has been rescued! SQ that was a nail bitting adventure:) WoW! Ok I'm breathing deeply now trying to compose myself:) Hey my 'expectation' were exceed:) That was truly an amazing adventure. Space Queen you are the best!!! That back breaking cliffy lead to this wonderful out come! I loved it. Thank you for your hard work~Bowing~ All that technical stuff. I think you could be alien because you know so much about it huh?!:) I'm teasing you SQ:) But it sounds so real to me. A non-alien:) Enough silliness from me:) I loved this episode ^_^
person Aflyingmonkey
schedule September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*sobs* BABIES REUNITED AND IT FEELS SO GOOD!!!! hfkdlas;fjk;ldjakl I can't. An amazing chapter once again, Mannah-san.
person v
schedule September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank god!! I'm so happy and also so amazed, I had no idea how they were going to survive, i couldn't think of any way out for them and it never occurred to me that the suits would help. I should of thought of it because that's how Iruka and Naruto survived the bombing but it just never crossed my mind, being caught up in the suspense and heartache of it all. BRAVO!!! I also have to mention, I love the way every time they have to figure out a problem, the children always think of Itachi's expectations or his training with them, how he helped make their survival possible. I just hope Rin and Akemi survived, I hope their safe. Joyfully waiting for the next chapter, and still hoping sicko pervert dies an agonizing death.... fan forever, v
person satterb
schedule September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I laughed like a lunatic! Being a mother myself, I was emotionally steamrolled when Naruto and Sasuke were able to hug their children. I loved this update. I still look forward to Itachi rejoining the pack. Thank you for the marvelous entertainment. Can't wait till next time.
person ahmenet
schedule September 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my.... so cruel. Cliffhanger of the highest magnitude. Pray the kids made if off the ship.
person Procrastination_is_key
schedule September 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my!!!!!

I am really hoping that we have missed a spectacular escape for those stuck on the Sakura and are just seeing things from Sasuke's PoV at the moment.

My worry about Shika has been growing exponentially. I forsee a very bad spell for him coming up. First he and Neji break up, then losing Sai and envisioning Su-chan hating him, to then believe that Haru and the others are dead and that he has failed- not good.

Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule September 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
No...just no... right? It's just a clifhanger... right?
person Procrastination_is_key
schedule September 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Haku!!!!!!!!!!! :( Poor Haku, though at least that part is over (hopefully). Now im even more worried about Kisame and Itachi! I just want the Uchiha family back together again so they can fix each other.

I do like how closer Haru and Ran have got. Its so sweet! It reminds me that the big litter arent as old as they're acting and its only the situation they are in.

I can't wait for the next chapter! It's all rolling now!!!