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Chapter 44. Mannah, say it isn't so! Please, they just can't be...

Update as soon as you can, please. I need to know what went wrong.

Oh, and sorry for the double post Saturday. When I tried to leave my review, all I would get was a blank screen. I didn't know if it posted or if I had typed the Captcha image wrong or what.

I usually think it's rude to ask an author to work faster, but just this once, and with all respect: please please please please post the next chapter soon!!!!!!!!!

*curls up into a ball*

Don't believe you (yet).

Did you hear me howling like To-chan?:) Oh Space Queen that cliffy is a back and knuckle breaker! Wow! I loved it!! That was riveting!!! My palms are sweaty. SQ I was on that bridge with them. You gave me a great visual. I could see it all. You know I loved Sasuke's thoughts on what he could be doing on the bridge and in the chair:) I loved every word of this chapter! You brought E & I and their lover to the big show:) We need all hands on deck to get our kids back safely:) You are simply the best:) My heart needs to be 'rescued' because of the cliffy but other than that it's a hell yea baby that was gooooD!

I think I'm lost. I'm just going to read what happens next. I am really sad about Sai. I am hoping that he survived in the explosion proof box. But that would not solve the problem of the illegality of his existence. So, I'm not going to get my hopes up. I look forward to the next update. Thank you for all your hard work.

OMG, please Lady Luck, let them be ok! This chapter gave me a heart attack. It was so intense, emotions so strong. Thanks again for your hard work, this chapter was magnificently written.

I'm speechless..I don't know what to say..the detail of this chapter was amazing, the ins and outs of everything they were doing to rescue the others..the children. It was like I could picture everything they were doing in my head..I'm gonna focus on that. If they're really dead, my heart is just broken, they were trying so hard, all of them...especially Haku and Sai. Its so horrible, so cruel...I won't believe they're dead yet...not yet.
always a loyal reader, v

Wow, because of the AFF problems this weekend I almost forgot to read this! I’m sorry!
First of all, I thought that Haku will tell the kids that they shouldn’t have try anything on their own. I’m glad he was smart enough to trust them. It was a bit like ‘an adventure’ from their past days.
Second – I never expected to Haru (OF ALL PEOPLE) having doubts about sleeping and having a problem with too uncomfortable suit to sleep…
This vision of him being just a toddler where he had fallen asleep in the no-gravity training will be forever printed in my mind! ^_^
Now about the ending – it’s too bad that there is no Itachi’s pov in this story. I wonder what he thinks now…

Queenie I'm sorry you have 3 reviews from me and they're all the same:) I thought my compute or the web site was acting up. So I sent 2 review here and one over at the other site. So delete one from here. Hey I just wanted my love to reach you some how:)