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This was... horrible... What happened to Haku? Please let someone get to them already....

Thank you for updating!!! I was terrified for Haru. I'm so glad he was kept safe. Thank you for giving us a little more hope for rescue. I love how clever Haru is. I look forward to the next chapter. Thank you so very much for all your hard work.

It took me a couple days to come to terms with writing a review for this chapter, I feel since so much of my emotions were involved when I was reading it I needed a few days to calm down so I wouldn't write with CAPITOLS and a large amount of exclamation points..(all due to how much I adore the characters of the children and how much I hate whats happening to some of them) ahem...so, okay..objectively...with each new chapter I read the intensity of the story line builds even more, I think even before I open a new chapter my heart starts pounding just trying to picture whats going to happen, although I believe the children to be incredibly resilient, they've been protected their whole lives, so seeing EVIL sicko pervert thru Haru's eyes (easily the most innocent of the children) makes me sob a little...I feel so bad for Rin but so happy she protected Haru then I feel guilty for that thought.., I also am seriously worried about Haku...I think if I admit that at odd times of the day, I wonder how they're all doing...that is not me being crazy..but just you being the best writer ever!!! ....HURRY UP AND SAVE EVERYONE!!!!!....sorry, sorry,...my bad, LOL ;)

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Poor Haru!!!! And poor Ran! And what has happened to Haku that he cant fulfil his 'punishment'? Sasuke needs to hurry up already. Good on Haru for burying the data about the good holes amongst the bad ones. I also dont think I've ever seen Rin being so selfless, although I don't believeanyone in that situation wouldn't try to save a child by switching places with them.

Yoshimi is concerning. It is good to see his family is still his priority but what is the print's deal with Yo-chan? Poor kid!

On a seperate point, any poetry the Orochimaru-s come up with i believe would be not only dull, but a painfully boring way to spend any amount of time... When do they have the time to write it? Shouldnt they be concocting evil plans and torturing minkies (instead of our ears)? And more importantly, why feel the need to share it with the universe? Why? Why?!?!?!?!? Nice touch.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

i have to keep imagining naruto tearing apart the orochimaru print one tiny piece at a time while reading the chapters with haru, ran, kazuki and the rest of them in order to not cry. good job haru for the backdoor plan, hope they get to use it to escape soon.
excellent work, cant wait for more

Ch 40 WoW!

Omg Haru you amazing child you! But Riiin. Ugh this is all so messed up. It makes me hurt in a good way. I can't for the next chapter Mannah-san.

Queenie I was wimping like one of the kits:) That was so intense! I'm very impressed with Haru-chan doing his back thing on the compute. That wasn't easy with cameras and snake man there. He's a chip off the old Shika block:) I have to give Yo-chan a yea baby! I'm sorry he had to kill but I'm glad he did. What is up with the gentleness of the old snake when it can to laying Yo-chan down?! Space Queen the undercurrent was brilliant! I'm worried to where is Haku-san?! Our beautiful queen has to be alright right?!:) When the Uchiha Clan rain down on old man snake for all he had done to their family members I believe the hold galaxy will hear of it! I loved it! ^_^

Chapter 40. Wow! Rin-san sacrificed herself for Haru's sake. She's a brave woman, in my opinion.

Thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.

No-one is safe from Madara :( Im really hoping his plan isnt as solid a second time round. And that Centre make him pay for trying to manipulate them as well. And then maybe the minkies, just for the hell of it...
The Sai and Sumiko team is sweet for keeping tabs on Shika in the simulator and out, but I still want to give him a hug. He is like the favoured uncle in Sasuke's family and they are his healing balm.

And yes, the mental image of Haru ripping someones throat out with his teeth, for all his genious, is amusing and yet, somewhat satisfying.

Looking forward to the next installment! (And congrats on the 3 chapters! *touch wood*)