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by mannahpierce

person Ash
schedule August 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry I've never reviewed. I'm normally reading these on my phone, or I'm in a rush, but it's no excuse! This series is probably one of the best I've read on AFF, or FF, or anywhere. In fact, it's the kind of series that, had it been published, I would have been jumping from foot to foot in anticipation of the next novel. Each week I look forward to a new chapter, I am hooked by the story (although I've never been into traditional pirate tales), and I am so excited every time you say you're going to continue the series!
I would understand if you chose to take a sabbatical, I mean, it would be pretty cool if you wrote a book or something (provided I got a copy. That's a necessity!), but you have so many fans, we'd all be devastated if you never came back to the In The Cold of Space, You Find The Heat of Suns series! We all support you, 100%, in whatever your eventual choice will be, and will be here waiting if you choose to take some time away, but you might even realise, after spending so long with this, that you can never truly stay away. It's therapeutic, chaotic, intensely insane, but also incredibly necessary, and we'd all be that much worse off for having lost you as an author.

Still, the decision ultimately resides with you. I hope it's one you enjoy.

Ash.
schedule August 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Still on your game after 2.5 years...honestly I am amazed you've achieved so much in your writing without coming to an impasse before now. I applaud you! I appreciate all that you've written and understand if you are getting to a point where you need to wrap up the tale. Even Kishimoto-sama has reached his limit.
person VillageFox
schedule August 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love wit this!! Oh wow, your work is excellent. So thorough, and well thought out, the details are impeccable....I'm just addicted. And you write so much!! I swallow whole fictions in a matter of a day or two, so the fact that yours took me two whole weeks is amazing. I'm eagerly awaiting your update!

Ciao,
VillageFox
person rek12
schedule August 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I started reading your story colours of the mind when you first posted it on AFF. I absolutely love your writing and would read anything that you post. I was hesitant to start reading your Naruto fanfiction though because I had been so enamored by the characters that you had created yourself i was worried that your fanfiction would be lacking something. When posted Jason recently I was sooo excited to read more of your original work. It was then that i thought I should give the rest of your work a try and I've read your whole Naruto saga in the past few weeks, I've been literally glued to my computer! I absolutely love what you have done with the characters. I'm a fan of Naruto too so I know that characters. I really like how you have had them evolve in their new environment and of course your plot and the universe you have created are amazing!! I don't want it to ever end!! every thursday and saturday I'm glued to my computer waiting for you to update. I know I should review more but in my defense I got to most or your work late in the game. I'm kind of rambling here i guess but i just wanted to tell you to keep at it and that you'll always have a loyal fan in me! And i'll always be eager to read anything that you write be cause to be honest you are one of my favorite authors ever!!
schedule August 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ok, just a title was enough for me to know what comes next.... The thought of killing Oro is always so good that it's almost worth it to bring him back.... but just almost and not really.
But to see him Kisame's hands.... hmmm...
So now at least Yoshimi is not alone.... it's kind of good.... in a way.... I'm trying to find some good points...
I hope the next chapter is not about Madara and his plotting because it's going to kill me.
I hope Shika will save the day.
I wonder if you have it already planned - the plot I mean - if you already know how is it goin to end or is it still unknown....
person Dawn
schedule August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOo That demented Snake print!!!! I will take that stick and ..oh whew it is just a STORY!!! A good one at that..:) Keep them coming!! :)
schedule August 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 37. Gah! That Orochimaru. He makes me so mad. I hope Sasuke and Naruto are able to rescue Haru and the others soon. Poor Haku. I hope Kisame rips Orochimaru apart.

Thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah. Keep up the awesome work, and I look forward to the next chapter.
person v
schedule August 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I do not like this at all!! The children being tortured!! By sicko pervert!! Of course, the cliffhangers in this are nail biting and tear-rendering, but really..Sicko Pervert needs to die!! Horribly and slowly!! When is help coming!! and what will happen to them if it does?? How will they deal with all of this? How will it affect who they are?? I'm very worried.
person Aflyingmonkey
schedule August 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg omg omg omg.... *sobs and curls up into a ball*... Can't wait for the next update.
person sadie237
schedule August 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! Did you hear me gasping over here:)? That mean son-of-a! Space Queen you have made the old snake man meaner than the anime:) I did get a good laugh in when Haru thought about what Kisama will do when he fines out about Haka-san:) Yea baby snake man has dug a very deep grave. Not only with Haku-san other half's but To-chan and Papa!! Oh and the hiding place in the bottom:) That was brilliant Queenie! And so Haku-san. The most beautiful and double deadly of them all:) I'm reviewing late because I'm still putting the house together after the move. Now it's me time:) Which translates to Space Queen time:) Let me just say I'm happy for every Saturday. I don't want you to lose your grove:) I love how you give my emotions and my heart it work out:) I'm NOT saying I didn't miss you on Wednesday. It just made me look harder to Saturday. You have 'capture' my heart and mind Oh Great Space Queen of the Naruto Space Universe ^_^