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by mannahpierce

person eilidhdawn
schedule September 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
waaahhh you're so mean
waaahhh more chappies
person Anon
schedule September 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh a cliffie! I'm dying! Can't wait til the next chapter.
person Procrastination_is_key
schedule September 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! There have been so many twists and turns in the story I can never guess whats coming next. I wasnt expecting Hoshi and I hope Rin can work her magic on her and Sasuke. Please please please let Sasuke live!!!! I really hope Madara dies, I dont think Naruto will be nice or want to stick to spacer code now. I cant believe theres only 2 more chapters to go!!!! I dont want it to end!
Cant wait for the next chapter!!!
person Lonelylulaby
schedule September 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
HI!!!!! It's been awhile and it will probably be awhile again, grad school is no joke. I am enjoying catching up Ch. 65 Jesus, there is so much going on I feel like I need to start at the very beginning in the Heat of Suns. LOL. Anywho, I loved Ran talking about Uchiha's and their possessiveness. This chapter and Naruto and Sasuke not having their howling/screaming sex yet is making me anxious. I'm so scared of the people I love in this story dying. I know this might be a stupid question and you might have already answered it in previous chapters but if they swore to Uchiha can't they just re-swear to Sasuke or is that TABOO?

ja ne till next time and keep up the fantastic work
person The horseman of death
schedule September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well you managed to cause my heart rate to spike to over 200, i feel rather woozy actually, i'm ok though it's returning to my normal resting rate of forty! dear sweet baby luck are you trying to give everyone a heart attack or is it just me, i think i need a cup of tea. once again you prove the pen is mightier than the sword and my poor heart, i loved it i may never sleep again but i loved it once again oh Mannah my queen, you have out done yourself now excuse me while i cry.
person sadie237
schedule September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
SQ!! May I say that has to be your best EVER chapter!!! The action, the people within the actions, the intense actions, good god that was incredible action:) The stuff old man was saying was so evil, I love it you captured him to a tee!! And I know you know what had tears in my eyes:) YES To-chan being d-tanked and running like the wind!! I lose 'control':) I re read that two times before I moved on:) WoW SQ I just love everything. Haku-san throwing his stuff in the air for him to get was awesome! You had so much excitement going on Hoshi-chan getting stabbed Papa coming up with super human strength! Then it was BANG BOOM WOW! Fur and teeth Yea Baby!!!! A cliffy that will be a pleasure to live with:) OH Space Queen ~BOWING~ Thank you for your hard work and brilliant ideas. I love you! See you for the next episode ^_^
person satterb
schedule September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
KYYYAAAAA!!!!! Please don't let Hoshi be killed! Oh my lord this chapter kept me on the edge of my seat. I love that Naruto was able to make it in time. I'm dying to read more, and sad too because that means the end of the story sooner. I look forward to the next update however and thank you so very much for all your hard work and brilliance!
person ShadyDarling
schedule September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh, gosh ;(
All the dry tears
person melissen
schedule September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I'm able to comment on it just yet...
We all know what I hope will happen and what I hope will not...
...um.... that's it. I'm too shaken.
Sasuke is stupid.
person redtatsu
schedule September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You had me at the edge of my chair on this chapter. OMG!!! So many thoughts going through my head right now. I have to go back and reread this. Can't wait for the next chapter.