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person roro237
schedule August 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! Queenie what the? I didn't see that in the works at ALL! Shika and Neji-san breaking up! You know I loved it when you throw monkey wrench around:) I'm so so happy that Sasuke now knows about old man. I should have guess that Naruto would have sense his evil before he witnessed it first hand with Shika. Not wanting to hurt his beloved with that information. Did I ever tell you I'm in love with To-chan oh hell I love Papa to:) Little sister can still surprise me. I glad that is one less thing for Shika busy mind to worried about. Ok so now the plan has started! The 'messages' received:) I'm glued to my seat for the next step of the plan. Oh Great Space Queen of the Naruto Space Universe thank you for all your hard work ~Bowing~ I loved it ^_^
person v
schedule August 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sorry on not reviewing for so long, finally caught up on all the chapters I missed. I find the details in this storyline just amazing, I was caught up in concern for someone with each chapter I read..its exhausting worrying about so many different people..umm..I mean characters (reminding myself once again that they're not real..lol) I'm worried for Haru..he's had so much thrown at him but also proud of how he handled everything. I'm worried for Itachi, and also for all those with sicko pervert O...I hate that he has one of the kits and is abusing him..Its just horrible. Although in the midst of all the bad thats happening, I also find with every chapter there is always hope and the strength of all the ones we adore is mindboggling. I don't understand about Neji and Shika...it seemed so quick..who is this woman..I hate her! (sorry, channeling Sumiko :) Hopefully I'll be able the read each chapter as it Posts and review accordingly because I appreciate that our reviews are welcome and enjoyed. Thank you for your wonderful writing. Always a huge fan, v
person v
schedule August 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ummmm...I feel that since I haven't been able to review for so long its only right I should leave another comment...worry...upsetting thought that won't let me sleep... What about Shikamaru???!! Who's going to love him now??!! *sniffle..sniffle..SOB!* First..forbidden,secret crush on Sasuke or Naruto (can't quiet figure that one out) that even he won't acknowledge, possible love of a lifetime that can't happen because megawatt millionaire genius is too old and too evil (except with him and haru) then went and DIED!!!, and now Neji loves a GIRL!! Poor Shika... he needs someone, cause he drops off the edge of crazy when his brain acts up!! and we love him!! and...i'm so emotionally overwrought with this chapter...and he deserves it!! No one would have the life they've led up to this point without him *SOB* Did I forget to say that he's one of my fifteen favorite characters in your stories, he's like number 3!! *sigh, sniffle* ....and I love your writing.
person eunmook
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! How can already awesome keep getting awesomer and awesomer. Everything interesting is, and you're creating another brilliant and totally fascinating new world that pulls you in and leaves you wanting more.
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ch. 35 - And i t was so nice and relaxing for a moment.... It made me want to watch some adventure movie, like Indiana Jones and the temple of doom... They're in trouble, aren't they? But if the enemies are just minkies and nekos then I thnk they have a chance. But... they're location will be revield... They ARE in trouble no matter what. The best way would be to hide but they probably don't have a good hide out... Maybe Riki will help. I wonder what would they do without him...
person liby318
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for the lack of reviews, however I have enjoyed the story and look forward to more chapters. Thanks for all the hard work!
person roro237
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Space Queen I missed you!!!! I was like the crew I knew you were there but I couldn't get to you to read you:) Plus and of course the int net was a day late getting set up. My heart was breaking when Papa and To-chan told them. Well I know for sure how handsomely beautiful Yuki-chan is if he reminded Papa of Haku!! When To-chan put the growl on it had the hair on the back of my neck standing up to:) I believe To-chan about the 'bond' it has to be heart and head. Neji was looking really sexy in bed with his hair layed out:) Then the way he brought Shika back from the edge was wOw! I loved every word ^_^
person roro237
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OH! MY god Space Queen that was a back breaker of a cliffy there:) When you said 'hazards' you weren't kidding. Baked snake! Queenie you're the best:) That was something I wouldn't have thought of in a million years:) Fried or on a stick but baked:) Another great chapter ^_^
person Dawn
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another oh nooooooooossssss chapter............. Love the cliff hangers!!! :) Hope some good lucks comes up soon
schedule August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 35. Oh, no! They've been betrayed. After avoiding all those crocodiles and snakes, this has to happen.

I can't wait for the next update, Mannah. I really hope everything is going to be okay with Haru and company.