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July 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh yay, they're not heading to orochimaru. And soon they'll all be together and then they'll kick some major millennnia old ass. Can't wait. Loved the end, and the constant references to Shika's fixation with Neji's hair.
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July 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I really feel for all of them. Poor Yasushi. It must be so hard for him.
And Shika. I love how you portrayed the workings of his mind, how it all comes crashing into him when he finally takes down the walls. I'm just really glad Neji is there for him!
Another amazing chapter and I can't wait until the next one.
And Shika. I love how you portrayed the workings of his mind, how it all comes crashing into him when he finally takes down the walls. I'm just really glad Neji is there for him!
Another amazing chapter and I can't wait until the next one.
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July 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 34. Everyone is starting to get back together now--Naruto and Sasuke and their children and Neji and Shikamaru. Seems like it won't be long before they are able to take down Izuna/Madara.
Keep up the awesome work, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.
Keep up the awesome work, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.
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July 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ch 33 & 34. Wow!!!!!!! More please.... :)
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July 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ch. 34.
I must say that when I was reading In the cold of space I didn’t like this whole ‘bonding’ thing. I thought it was a little unfair. To me it was like Tristan and Izolde story. Like it was less than a real love. Now, from what Naruto had said, I can tell it’s not less. It so much more.
Thank you. It was good to hear it.
Yasushi – so smart and so brave!
About Hinata – is she going to stay with them from now on? Will she fall for Naruto, like Hinata in anime?
I hope that Shika and Neji will meet with Iruka and Kakashi soon. It would be such a relief. I hope Shika won’t be afraid to talk about his opinion of Izuna to Kakashi or Iruka. They are the closest ‘family’ members. It’s obvious that they will follow only Sasuke no matter what. Even Izuna knows it, so Shika should too. He’s smarter than that bastard.
I must say that when I was reading In the cold of space I didn’t like this whole ‘bonding’ thing. I thought it was a little unfair. To me it was like Tristan and Izolde story. Like it was less than a real love. Now, from what Naruto had said, I can tell it’s not less. It so much more.
Thank you. It was good to hear it.
Yasushi – so smart and so brave!
About Hinata – is she going to stay with them from now on? Will she fall for Naruto, like Hinata in anime?
I hope that Shika and Neji will meet with Iruka and Kakashi soon. It would be such a relief. I hope Shika won’t be afraid to talk about his opinion of Izuna to Kakashi or Iruka. They are the closest ‘family’ members. It’s obvious that they will follow only Sasuke no matter what. Even Izuna knows it, so Shika should too. He’s smarter than that bastard.
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July 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Finally had a chance to catch up on my missed chapters!!! :) And this last on was MIND BLOWING!!! I think I saw stars too!!! :) As always my favored writer.... FABULOUS!!!!!!!!!! Thanks so much for your chapters!!! Now get back to work... MUAH!
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July 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
so delightful in so many different ways - the kits with their lists, and I love how Haku clearly still has it, if even Haru can't deny his sexiness with his hair down in a low slung sarong. I really hope Itachi is planning something truly devious and Uchiha-ly vengeful. All Orochimarus need to be squished like bugs from both sides - between the crew of the Oak and the rest of Uchiha left behind. And then they all need to come back home and stomp on stoopid old Madara. and then dancing with To chan! And nobody dies. Or however you see the story going...
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July 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 34. I just want to murder Orochimaru right now. But despite what they saw happening to their brother, it is good that the boys can have a moment where they can be boys.
Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.
Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.
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July 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
jsklfjdlsaj;fdklsajfdl Haru, Kazuki, and Kuuya all talking was so cute and brotherly and gave me all the amazing feelings. I can not wait for another amazing chapter Mannah-san! :D
(P.S. Orochimaru is a dirty bastard and I can not wait for Uchiha to pulverize him.)
(P.S. Orochimaru is a dirty bastard and I can not wait for Uchiha to pulverize him.)
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July 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ch.33
I knew it. Why if something good happens there always something bad follows… It’s life, I guess…
It was so…. Unbearable to see poor kit on his knees in front of Orochimaru….
Kazuki is straight? Disappointing fact. I was so curious who’s on his list.
When Haru said that Gama-sama is only protecting his tribe and that Sasuke would do the same I think he was wrong. Naruto would never let him make such a decision. Never. They would look for some other way. They would never sent away people who are in need of help.
I knew it. Why if something good happens there always something bad follows… It’s life, I guess…
It was so…. Unbearable to see poor kit on his knees in front of Orochimaru….
Kazuki is straight? Disappointing fact. I was so curious who’s on his list.
When Haru said that Gama-sama is only protecting his tribe and that Sasuke would do the same I think he was wrong. Naruto would never let him make such a decision. Never. They would look for some other way. They would never sent away people who are in need of help.