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by mannahpierce

person roro237
schedule July 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I got a lump in my throat trying not to cry. This was sad sweet and loving all in one:) At this point I don't know who I dislike more snake man or old man?! I couldn't think of a word strong enough so I'll just use that:) It seem like Ka-chan was doing a good job of 'Intimidation' himself on more than one occasion. I loved that he raced in to save his brother. Our litter has grown up beautifully! Space Queen I'm moving and I wont have inter-net until Tuesday the 31st. Can you feel my pain?:) I'm going to miss Saturday!! IF I'm still alive on Tuesday night you will hear from me:) Oh and Haku-san wOw! I could just imagine how down right sexy he was looking ^_-
schedule July 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ch.32 NEEEEEEEEEEEEEJIIIIIIIIII! So good…. Shika unsure of how Neji would greet him? Ridiculous and sweet…

Wonderful chapter, so full of hope and that… drive… like an energy drink!

Shika as an uncontrollable force – so enchanting and cool. I loved that. I wish I could see more of that determined Shikamaru. He’s beautiful when he has a purpose, a goal… No wonder that he is so attractive to powerful people like Klenn or even straight Madara, who can’t see past the tip of his own nose... Madara unfortunately is smart enough to see it all too…. That Sasuke’s crew (equal FAMILY) will not follow him. EVER. I actually hoped he wouldn’t realize that for a bit longer but…

It gives me a thrill when I think of possibilities how brilliant can Shikamaru be with a tool like Sai (no offence for Sai!)
Shika getting away from Madara is such a HUGE relief!!! And Kiba was sweet when he offered to go with him. Maybe he is not just a babysitter. Maybe he wants to do something more too. And now they have Neji and they will meet Kakashi and Iruka…. It’s like the new beginning…
Garner Parrad – touching and sad but it’s always so great to hear about Klenn. He was the most amazing OC I’ve ever read about. His death was so unwelcomed…

Ps. I’m sorry, I haven’t got a time to read Jason yet…. But I will!
person Procrastination_is_key
schedule July 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
NEJI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So glad those two are reunited! I'm really hoping its a case of absence makes the heart grow fonder cos they are so cute!
It was nice to see an apparence by Garner too, i like that he is his own character rather than just a part of Klenn's.
I forsee tension between Uchiha and Hyuga as Sasuke now has Neji and Hinata...hmm i wonder how long that will stay secret?

Can't wait for the next chapter!
person eunmook
schedule July 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh yay oh yay oh yay! So many reasons to celebrate - not least that you've got another story up... And then to top it all off, Neji's back!
person cynaga
schedule July 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ch 32 wonderful!!!!!
schedule July 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 32. Mannah, the ending, please tell me I didn't imagine it. That's really him, right? He's really back? I'm so relieved and happy. ^-^

And it was nice to see Garner again. I was wondering how he was coping.

Anyway, thank you for another awesome, amazing, wonderful chapter, Mannah. I can't wait until the next update, and I will definitely check out your new original story.
person Slynx
schedule July 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
AAaaah! This chapter was awesome. I'm dancing on my chair. I love how Asuma just took back control and how the entire crew dislikes Madara. And then the end! Awww, it will be good for the two of them to be together again.
person roro237
schedule July 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful! I'm so happy Neji is back with Shika! If at one time Shika was feeling like he wasn't in love with Neji. I think now he knows he's doesn't just love Neji but he is in love with him! Than goodness for our 'Allies'. Garner-san was right on time having the ship close by. Shika is the A-Team you know what they say "I love it when a plan comes together". I didn't know Shika had that plan going on?! He was able to get all that done without old bastard fining out:) I can tell how he and Asuma and Kakashi are all on the same page without words being spoken. Queenie you have so much excitement going on in every front! I LOVE it! Of course Yo-chan with the snake print. The kids on the Toad Planet. Itachi and crew going thought gods know what! Don't for get about my heart condition:) You know I'm teasing you I love every bit of it! Thank you for all your hard work ~Bowing~ Episode 32 was fantastic ^_^
person Aflyingmonkey
schedule July 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'VE MISSED YOU NEJI!!!! Oh mah Jesus things are definitely closing in on Madara. I wonder/worry about Naruto and Sasuke and all of the kits. I can not wait for the next update Mannah-san. :D
person satterb
schedule July 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is getting too exciting for words! I can't express how much I love reading it. I'm thrilled every time I see it updated. Thanks for all your hard work.