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I love this! I have been so busy lately that I haven't been able to keep up with the updates, I just read several chapters and am so entranced by the story that I can't wait for more. I found that I was really getting into it, in my head I was yelling at Shikamaru to think its not Izuna it's Madara.Lol. I am completely loving where this is going, you are doing an absolutely fantastic job, I look forward to reading more! Thanks.

Chapter 31. I knew Naruto and Sasuke had it too easy. I wonder what they are going to do now. Curse you, Orochimaru.

As usual, thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I am looking forward to Saturday's update.

I enjoyed this chapter so much - everything, from the last column 'to record if they worked properly', to the colour coded plans, to the pirouetting minky with the broom, was just lovely. As if seeing them back in action as a team weren't enough, you clearly had a lot of fun writing this chapter, just like I had reading it. But the giddiness ends with the last bit - coz yo chan is still with the Orochimaru print, as are Dan, Rin and Akemi...

No! We were so close! Poor Yo-chan... I just want everyone to be together again... Another excellent chapter Mannah-san. Can not wait for the next one! :D

OMG! I felt like I was watching the anime:) That was so fantastic!! Really!!! I'm heart sick that Yo-chan isn't there. My god that was an intense infiltration of that ship! I'm trembling a little still:) If I was reading your book I wouldn't be able to put it down after that chapter. I would just be late for work or call off:) Thank goodness you're in control or I would be in trouble:) Space Queen I loved! I can't wait for the next installment. Oh I almost forgot you were very 'stealthy' with that cliffy. I didn't see if coming ^_^

Damn, every time minkies appear I get too emotional. I feel so bad for them all. They’re cute and harmless…

It was surprising but also very nice that some things finally went relatively well… unfortunately it was a short lived relief. It can’t be happening, right? Orochimaru won’t hurt Yoshimi… right? And how the whole bonding process is activated? Why did Naruto bond with Sasuke? Because he was seme for the first time? How did it happen? I always thought that it required some emotions…. Or something.

Is it really possible for Orochimaru to bond the kits to himself? Even though they hate him? …. (Rany…. – it’s in my native)

I am so exciting about the toad hybrids world. Is very refreshing to go to a different and new place of the world you have created. Gamariki is so sweet with Haru!

I love how Shikamaru cares for Sai as well, maybe because I didn’t perceive Sai as a child before. For a seven type genius (who is supposed to have so many difficulties in the social interaction) Shikamaru sure knows how to make friends.

I don’t know how Sasuke and Naruto are going to resolve the situation they are in, but I am looking forward to it.

Ch 30 So good!!!!

Hoo boy... everybody's gearing up and getting their act together now. Poor Haru, he always suffers the worst. Another excellent chapter, and now I want more, more, more.

Chapter 30. No, Mannah, not a cliffhanger again. Now I'm going to agonize until Wednesday gets here to find out what happens next. But that's okay. I'm sure no matter how long the wait, the next chapter will be awesome. I'll just have to be patient. :)