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July 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Haru-chan getting pranked with leeches. The Frog tribe is just wonderful!! I hadn't thought about Sasuke needing exercise well Naruto to. Something has to give soon for our boys. Hopeful the plan to set mini bombs up will give them a little relief. Sai has turned out to be a great help so far. Naruto is a smart cookie. The message he sent Shika and realizing what has been going on. My love for that man grows all the time:) Space Queen I loved it as usual! This chapter didn't reek havoc on my heart:) My 'responses' to the ship in the spaceport is please let it be one of ours! You know I adore your titles. I always try to figure out what you were thinking:) I think this time it was Naruto's response.(of course I would) I love everything about your story ^_^
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July 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
CH.30
This whole part about the Gama – tribe is incredibly interesting! It’s so new and… great! Poor Haru… I guess nerds are always picked on even when no one even knows what the nerd is…. But he was brave and cool. Very mature too! Bravo!
It’s so sweet that Shika treats Sai like just another kid. He’s already a part of the family. When you know how to make friend you can make the most incredible family. Theirs already contain purebreds and hybrids, Uchihas and Hyuuga, two guys in one body, two typed geniuses, now even an AI and one unidentified overly lovable and unexplainable creature that put it all together (known as Naruto)
I’m in awe of the way you always give us what we want in a certain intervals of time (chapters). Things like smut and adventure. You always keep it perfectly balanced, The fun, the drama, and all other things. I wonder if you have maybe some schedule to keep it right…? Or maybe only I see it that way… but I hope not.
I liked it whe Shik recognized how important for Sai’s development as a person was the fact that he had been practically raised by children. Children are honest. It was the best thing that could happen to Sai I guess…. He experience a real childhood. I think that emotionally he will grow up along with the litter….
I guess it’s pointless to write every im how I can’t wait for the next update, because you already know it. But still can always say how happy and gratefull I am for this story and regular updates. BIG THANK YOU!
This chapter was really great. Sasuke and Naruto with a plan and Shika looking for a traitor. I hope he already knows who is the one….
This whole part about the Gama – tribe is incredibly interesting! It’s so new and… great! Poor Haru… I guess nerds are always picked on even when no one even knows what the nerd is…. But he was brave and cool. Very mature too! Bravo!
It’s so sweet that Shika treats Sai like just another kid. He’s already a part of the family. When you know how to make friend you can make the most incredible family. Theirs already contain purebreds and hybrids, Uchihas and Hyuuga, two guys in one body, two typed geniuses, now even an AI and one unidentified overly lovable and unexplainable creature that put it all together (known as Naruto)
I’m in awe of the way you always give us what we want in a certain intervals of time (chapters). Things like smut and adventure. You always keep it perfectly balanced, The fun, the drama, and all other things. I wonder if you have maybe some schedule to keep it right…? Or maybe only I see it that way… but I hope not.
I liked it whe Shik recognized how important for Sai’s development as a person was the fact that he had been practically raised by children. Children are honest. It was the best thing that could happen to Sai I guess…. He experience a real childhood. I think that emotionally he will grow up along with the litter….
I guess it’s pointless to write every im how I can’t wait for the next update, because you already know it. But still can always say how happy and gratefull I am for this story and regular updates. BIG THANK YOU!
This chapter was really great. Sasuke and Naruto with a plan and Shika looking for a traitor. I hope he already knows who is the one….
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July 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
so close... is it almost halfway through the story already? It's weird how it feels both like it's going too slow and too fast at the same time. Or is it just me? I like how everyone has gone on the down low, and thank god Shikamaru's caught on to Izuna - I hope it doesn't take him too long to figure out the leak - especially since he owns the stellar exchange. He was a total superhero in the last book, feels a bit like he's lost his cape in this one so far: he's being normal smart.
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July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ch 29 Outstanding!!!
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July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
they trust him with info so blindly. they dont even know "izuna" enough to really trust him unlike with sasuke who they've known since he was a child... argh! they aggravate me(the crew minus shika) but i love this story.
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July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very exciting - there is so much going on! Sorry I have not reviewed in awhile; I've been traveling and I can't seem to submit a review on my phone. Evidently, it doesn't think I'm a real person. I have now followed your story on four continents.
Uchiha seems much more powerful than Orochimaru, yet Orochimaru and allies keep forcing our heroes into mortal danger. It is, of course, because Orochimaru has no scruples, no regard for life other than his own, even his own prints. Sort of like a suicide bomber's master in our own universe.
I had a little bout of mourning a few chapters ago when I thought Itachi's death was imminent (and you still may kill him off, O Goddess of the Uchiha AU). Itachi was a bad candidate for rehabilitation (selective amnesia? really?) but you pulled it off.
Uchiha seems much more powerful than Orochimaru, yet Orochimaru and allies keep forcing our heroes into mortal danger. It is, of course, because Orochimaru has no scruples, no regard for life other than his own, even his own prints. Sort of like a suicide bomber's master in our own universe.
I had a little bout of mourning a few chapters ago when I thought Itachi's death was imminent (and you still may kill him off, O Goddess of the Uchiha AU). Itachi was a bad candidate for rehabilitation (selective amnesia? really?) but you pulled it off.
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July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aaah, it's so exciting! You really have a thing for cliffhangers, don't you? *grins*
I love how Shikamaru is starting to realize what's going on and can't wait to see what'll happen next.
I love how Shikamaru is starting to realize what's going on and can't wait to see what'll happen next.
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July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 29. I can't even begin to comment on this chapter in fear of dumping a whole lot of spoilers in my review. And I don't want to do that in case a new reader happens to read the reviews before they read the actual story. I will say that I am overjoyed by the good news regarding a certain member of the crew that was revealed this chapter. There is also a definite battle of the wits going on between two key players. And the ending is making me crave the next chapter. I am going to be gnawing my fingernails until Saturday gets here, I swear.
Anyway, please keep up the amazing work, Mannah, and I will be waiting for the next chapter.
Anyway, please keep up the amazing work, Mannah, and I will be waiting for the next chapter.
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July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
omg... Sasuke rescuing his children.. omg I can't take the suspense. Another well executed chapter Mannah-san. I can not wait for more! :D
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July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So good to hear that Shika was thinking about killing Madara! I liked that. I wonder for how long Neji is safe…..
“ Between them, they had to persuade Sasuke not to step aside.” – I’ve been waiting to hear that but I was sure that Kakashi would be the first with this attitude.
And finally: Goddamn it, why did Kamatari said that through the intercom? He should tell it only to Shikamaru… I hope soon others will join Shika’s front without fear. The New Uchiha is NOT just Uchiha. It’s not the same thing and they belong to the new Uchiha. I hope they’ll understand that too and act accordingly.It’s all so exciting, especially now when at least some good thing are happening!!!
“ Between them, they had to persuade Sasuke not to step aside.” – I’ve been waiting to hear that but I was sure that Kakashi would be the first with this attitude.
And finally: Goddamn it, why did Kamatari said that through the intercom? He should tell it only to Shikamaru… I hope soon others will join Shika’s front without fear. The New Uchiha is NOT just Uchiha. It’s not the same thing and they belong to the new Uchiha. I hope they’ll understand that too and act accordingly.It’s all so exciting, especially now when at least some good thing are happening!!!