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I really, really, really can't wait to see Madara's plan fail! I can't wait to see him and the others, Orochimaru, Karin and others meet their sticky ends!!!! But I don't want this story to come to an end either. I love it soooo much. Thank you for your hard work. I wonder when or even if Sai is going to shed some light on what is going on with Madara/Izuna. He's the only member of the household that Madara is not aware of and has the means to look in on what's really going on. Love it and your talent.

O M G!!!!!! I'm on the edge of my seat at this very moment! WoW! Please let Sasuke get the message first!! That crazy old sucker:) Setting and planning what's going to be changed when he takes over. That just pisses me off! The 'decision' that Shika made to go talk to Hinata was the best! I realize just how important the oath was when Shika gave up all or most of the money. So for him to make that decision and not tell the news of Neji it had to be a tough one. Queenie this episode was the best! Thank you for another great adventure ^_^

That was so sweet! Such a relief to have this little adventure break from all the bad things. I hope they'll meet Gamakichi and Gamatatsu!
Kazuki voiced all those things I was always worried about. He's so great and he deserves all the best and he never actually gets it....

If writing was easy, we'd all be best-selling authors, and that wouldn't be any fun. I think the difficulty of any art form is what makes it fun, gives the artist (or writer in this case) something to motivate them. Even when the process of creating said art drives us nuts!

Anyway, regarding Chapter 28. Mannah, I know you're probably getting tired of me saying this by now, but you have amazed me yet again! The planet you created was stunning. I thought at first it would be like the Mannah Pierce version of Kirigakure because the planet was all water. But let me say I am excited to see those hybrids in this saga. I have wondered for a while if you were going to include them, especially since they are such a big part of the "Naruto" canon-verse, and you did! You've made my day for sure.

And before I go, the ending definitely showed how Sasuke and Naruto's kids have matured. Those were some pretty heavy things that were being discussed at the end.

Anyway, keep up the awesome work, Mannah, and I look forward to the next chapter.

"with huge, brightly coloured toad hybrids" - so relaxing - this is the first chapter in a long while which feels like it's letting you take a breath again - a child sized adventure, with 'nice like choza san' toads, is just what the doctor ordered.

Loving Kazuki and Kuuya and how we're suddenly getting deeper into the litter as individuals all. Enjoyed it so immensely!

This is why you are the Great Queen of Naruto Space Universe. I have tears in my eyes:) For a lot of reasons. Kuuya is wonderful he didn't want to hurt anyone like To-chan. The toad tribe huh?! You're the best when it come to using the old stuff with a new twist. Gama tribe was brilliant!! I was so touched by Ka-chan and Haru conversation. I had never thought about the best friend brother thing like that before. Then the talk about the kits living only one third of a pure blood life span. That always make me sad:) I know it's silly. I just can't help it Queenie:) It's also why I love your story! Oh OMG I loved today adventures! Scrap started it all. ^_^

You updated this before I had a chance to comment on the previous post. I love Sai. I loved the interaction between Sai and Shika. I'm also looking forward to learning more about the frog-men. Thanks for all your hard work on this story. I love it so. I'm sad that we are going through the bad times in the story but I still dread the end of the story as well. Look forward to more.

so cute. the ending of this chap was so cute.

Yay! Go Team Sasuke!
So glad everything is looking up now, if only slightly. It was also nice to touch bases with several of the groups.
Waiting with bated breath, as always, for the next chapter. :)

Me and the boys (Naruto&Sasuke) thank you for giving us a quickie:) I need that so I know how much they need that:) I'm laughing as I wrote that! I'm happy with the progress. The young ones are safe in space. Haru and crew are going where the Lancet is. I would say my 'Outlook' is hopeful ^_^ PS Semen floating was something funny to imagine:)