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Oh, boy. What now? Not so abandoned planet? Or is this gonna connect to super tronnies and SAI somehow. And really, stuck in arch-enemy's mothership, toss your kids out in space, then have a quickie?! Not that I'm complaining, just... very intrigued by your plotting process.

I waited all day like a little kid dying to tinkle (without the crotch holding tho'). And then I gave up checking my inbox and checked directly here instead. Halfway through the new chapter, I got the email alert. Good day. (or at least the last half hour of it.) I've been suffering from withdrawal since saturday, caught myself almost beginning to read the original a couple of times - close call, that.

Ch 27 Said is so much fun and plot is really getting good!

Chapter 27. Mannah, you have amazed me yet again. I don't know how you do it. Yes, I do. You're extremely talented and a genius.

Your characterization of Shikamaru and Sai convinced me that they would work well together at anytime. I loved the humor with Naruto and Sasuke, especially given what has happened on their end lately. And you know I loved the romance (and yaoi) between Naruto and Sasuke. Zero gravity sex is obviously awesome. The cliffhanger is going to eat at me until Saturday, so you have got to update as soon as you can Saturday, okay?

Thank you for another awesome chapter and I'll be waiting for the next one.

No Madara? THANK YOU!!! (although I am curious about how he is going to act toward Shika after what he had done…)
I can’t believe Naruto actually had the ‘thingy…’ that was good! I wonder what would they do if he hadn’t… They probably would do it anyway.
And the sex scene with no gravity was hilarious and very original!!! And the comment about cleaning… well… ha ha ha! who would have thought about that in this situation anyway….
Shika was so cool and understanding about Sai. That was nice. I knew Haru was worried too much.
Neji is ‘safe’? What does that mean?
I hope that Kazuki and Haru will find Kuuya since we just get to actually know him a bit….
This chapter was really great!

Taaaa Daaaa! Yay! This is what I was waiting for. I'm so happy Sai has made his presence known, and good for Su-chan for doing the right thing. I love this story....can't say it enough. Thanks for updating.

Wow! You so totally cannot end it there!!! Great job with ratcheting up both the tension and the optimism with everyone rallying together to protect Shika from Madara. Also, kinda quick with Izuna revealing his reality, not at all subtle like one would expect from a guy who's been waiting at least a millenia or so. Did he switch his tissue sample with Izuna's? And if so, would checking him against his sons's reveal his real identity? Or at least expose his false one?

Chapter 26. What an ending! Mannah, you have done it again! Awesome job as always. I can't wait for the next chapter.

OMG!!! You know I'm laughing my a-off at the old man getting puked on:) That was my favorite of this chapter. As time goes on his true colors are coming out. The way he has changed the table seating for briefing. That is something everyone can see. I hope Shika will put the pieces together and realize that is not Izuna-sama. I'm so proud of Shika even in the face of all the madness he knew it was wrong to be touched that way. I like that so much because it's loyalty to one's partner. God's knows that is rear these days:) WoW little sister has really grown up! If I didn't know any better I would say she is helping keep Shika grounded. I hope Shika didn't give the old bastard all the funds. Queeny I absolutely loved it! ^_^

YES! Sumik finally did something brilliant!!! Haru should have done that long time ago! It was… thirilling I CAN’T WAIT TO SEE SHIKA’s eaction!!
And who and when came up with what SAI means???? That was great!
But still… I’m so… so ANGRY! Why won’t Madara just die for whatever reason...? He could fell of the stairs (if they have some) or choke on his dinner…. (-_-) He’s disgusting.
Shika was great… but there was a gigantic miscalculation on my part. I was sure Shika was sworn to Sasuke, not to the Uchiha. I was so wrong… It’s … tragic…
I’m glad Madara didn’t rape him and I’m super glad that now Shika knows that he’s not all that great. Now he, Kashi and Asuma and the rest can create some kind of resistance movement…or something. I know that those older ones are often too traditional but THEY are different, aren’t they? And now they have Sai! I have a reason to live until Wednesday!

Ch26. So sad!