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by mannahpierce

person eilidhdawn
schedule June 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
aarrgghhh i just wanna shake some of these overprogrammed clan members
there's no proof sasuke and naruto are dead; just missing
good chapter can't wait for more
schedule June 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i hope with the mind of sai and shika they can kick "izuna's" plan to the shitter! shika/neiji ftw!
person satterb
schedule June 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to thank you for updating this wonderful story. Theres nothing I can say because this story is soooo good, my comments could not do you justice. LOL Thanks for all your hard work.
person eunmook
schedule June 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
How absurd is it to hope Itachi managed to tow the mulligan drive and improver away from the Oak?
person roro237
schedule June 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I had to cracker-up at Naruto:) He tells Sasuke not to give into anger! After Naruto woke Sasuke's reply was the best. What happen dobe. I loved it! That's our boys:) That helped to take some of the anxiety away:) This is such a suspense fill adventure Queeny! I love it and you!! ^_^
person eilidhdawn
schedule June 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
sounds like a plan to me
person eunmook
schedule June 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh yay, they have a plan! Good to know Kuuya's safe, and also so glad they're on the ship with their captured children. Unless you have some horrendous reversals planned, things are already looking up. I'll trust Shika to keep hating on Madara, and wouldn't it be awesome if he was outwitted/caught out by SAI and Sumiko. That just leaves Neji, who you might have been phasing out for a long time now...
schedule June 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 25. Mannah, your genius has amazed me once again. Such an exciting chapter. You are the best. Keep up the amazing work, and I look forward to the next chapter.
schedule June 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love their plan! I can’t wait to see the ripping head off part. I’m sure it will be lovely only if you really give us a chance to see it. The whole chapter full of stress and tension… It was hard…
Can’t wait to see Naruto in action. He didn’t have much chance to show off in an awfully long time… I hope that even though he had been paralyzed he is still impossibly strong and fit, more even than the kits! He’s Naruto after all!!!! (Maybe no Uzumaki and maybe without Kyuubi in his chakra system but still…)
Thank you for telling something about Kuuya. I always wondered what kind of people are other kits (other than Kazuki and Yuki) and now we have something about Kuuya. Nice!
person maliya
schedule June 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
When Shikamaru said "I hate you" my heart skipped a beat.

Poor Su chan, she is going to have rough times with Neji gone and a depressive brother to care. Thanks god she has the toughness and persistence of Yoshino, the intelligence of Shikaku and the help and friendship of Sai.

Madara is a crazy bastard. I want him gone so much. How dare he use Klenn’s Arts Centre for his own maquiavelic plans? I still can't believe how easily Uchida fell in his hands, what are his plans now? What does he wants to achieve besides regain uchida’s wealth?

Thanks the lady that Sasuke, Naruto, Haru, Hikaru, Kazuki, Ryuu and Kuuya are free. I’m sure that they will be able to make contact with the allied crews.

Thanks again for your hard work!