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Great chapter!

I love seeing how Shika's mind works. Though I don't like seeing him so upset. I hope Sumiko will step up so Madara won't have a chance to. I get the feeling however that Madara may have seriously underestimated Shika and his capabilities. I want to see the vengeful side of him again. Like with the Snuffers, but more so. I think it's very effective to have Neji abducted whilst he and Shika weren't seeing completely eye-to-eye. Will make for an even more guilt-ridden Shika.

Thank you! Can't wait til Wednesday!

oh no no no no... though I guess we were all getting too complacent and comfortable. But I do kinda (not really) wish that I had encountered this series a year from now, when its all complete and I can read it straight for three days like I did with all the rest of it.

Shikas brain is better than even he can understand. I hope Sai can get into action soon now that Sumiko is informed. Poor Neji and Go Sakura our hope is on you.

OMG! WoW!! I hate that old imposture. But his plan was sound. That was a lot of stuff going on wOw!!! I loved every word:) I have to tell you that,that was the first time 'Waiting' every had my heart beating like crazy! Now the plan is in full swing huh! This chapter was amazing wOw! Loved it ^_^

Chapter 24. I feel like they walked right into Madara's trap this time. First with Sasuke and Naruto and the children taking off on their own. And then Neji and Shikamaru's relationship being on the rocks no thanks to Izuna/Madara's "crush" on Shikamaru. And now Neji's been kidnapped and Shikamaru is feeling vulnerable, not just for Neji being taken but the fact that there has been no communication from Sasuke. I honestly have no idea how the good guys are going to come out on top of this one. Madara's too smart and he's got everyone fooled. Plus, he's got the help of Orochimaru and the Akatsuki on his side. Please tell me we're going to have a happy ending when all is said and done here, Mannah.

Please, keep up the amazing work, and I look forward to the next chapter.

CH 24. I love when everything happens in such a crazy pace!!! And totally love Asuma!
‘Klenn’s Arts Centre’ – wow… just… wow. At first just the name gave thills but thinking about what actually IS stored in there….
Shikamaru’s reaction to Madara’s flirty manipulations are (were) slightly disappointing considering his ‘talk’ with Naruto… I always thought that if there is a man whose brain is actually in his head instead of pants than it would be Shika (such a brain… ach…)…. I was wrong. Why does he have to answer every question that this sleazy man asks… Apparently Kakashi didn’t teach him well enough… But then again my jaw dropped when he said “I hate you!” to Madara. It was brilliant!!!
And even though I sometimes think stuff like “Neji is not enough for Shika” …. I love him too at the moment. The way Madara treated him makes me want to kick something… And I really hope he wil be fine… not just for Shika’s sake!
And the fact that Madara does THAT to Izuna’s name….. it kills me.

I know I haven't commented in a while, but that's because I have been SPEECHLESS these past few chapters. With Sasuke and everyone else incapacitated and Shikamaru worrying about Neji, who is kidnapped, oh my god this is just... Excellent Writing, Mannah-san. I can not wait for the next chapter.

Ch 24. OMG. :(

i love shika in this. he just knows subconciously that its Izuna's" fault. although how can "izuna" out think him? isnt shika's job to think about all the possibilities? also why do they tell "izuna" everything thing that they do in detail? u would think he WAS Uchiha-sama.

enjoyed latest chapter very much
looking forward to seeing upcoming chapters