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This is the part I've been dreading. I have come to love and care for these characters so much. I now look forward to your updates so that i can see the bad guys fall. But that also means that the story will be over. So sad. I can't wait to see the next chapter. Thank you for all your hard work. This has been one of my very favorite series of stories since I've been reading fan fiction. I will miss this story when it's over.

Oh man, I'm right there with Naruto and Haru. It feels so weird with the big litter all broken up. I feel bad that out of the three only one believes that Sai has feelings. I loke him at first I didn't know how he was going to fit into the story but now I can't imagine him not being there. They grow up so fast, poor Haru he's going to be the runt of the litter for a while. It sucks when you grow older and apart, then you start to realize things about your siblings you never saw before. Thanks for this wonderful chappie. I haven't abandoned you, just had to let some chapter accumulate ^__^

Ja ne till next time

Oh sweet baby Jesus, someone stop this man. Shikamaru would be a wreck if Haru, Naruto and Sasuke were to perish. Damn Sasuke and his need to be honorable. Thank the lord for Naruto and his amazing nose. I love how Kazuki is a mini Naruto, and I know I say that a lot but it's the truth.

Ja till chapter 17

Ok, this is a great development, maybe Sumiko will allow Sai to go into the restricted places Haru doesn't let him go in the household. I feel like Sai will be able to prevent something oriole from happening in the coming 15 days. I'm glad that Sumiko is growing and her and Haru are getting along. Haru as a parent is wonderful. I really really really like Sai.


Ja till next time, I'ma take a break again. Maybe till school starts so I have something wonderful to occupy my mind. We shall see if I can wait that long.

Finally back online, having such a good time getting caught up on all the chapters i missed. Enjoyed Haru's story so much and loved that Five is now part of Uchiha and then started on Betrayal.... I want to say that I think your a wonderful author, your ability to connect the readers to your characters on an emotional level and the way you draw us into the storyline makes you my favorite author on AFF. That said... I'm so upset, I've had a sick feeling in my stomach and with every new chapter it gets worse and worse, and now sicko crazy man has the children...this is bad...so bad... and I'm so worried about Itachi, where is he?? What is he gonna do?? What if someone dies!!! Wha!t if sicko crazy man hurts the children!!! What is Madara going to do to Shikamaru and Neji ??

Oh gods I loved the last sentence. I know it's true but it was good to hear it.
The development makes me angry so I won't think about that. Who are th main targets? Is it really Sasuke, Haru and Hikau or maybe Shikamaru and Haru. Does Orochimaru know that Haru is a genius? When will he finally die....? So manny questions.... So manny answers ahead. You're a genius to make this story interesting for so long! I'm really impressed!

Chapter 23. This is like when Pein kidnapped the children all over again but worse because Orochimaru is the kidnapper this time. And thank goodness those were cat hybrids and not those perverted bullmen. I still have nightmares about those guys and what they did to poor Itachi. Speaking of Itachi, I really hope he doesn't sacrifice himself to save Sasuke, but this is Itachi we're talking about, so it still may happen.

Anyway, keep up the amazing work, Mannah, and I look forward to the next chapter.

Wonderful! Sad and sweet at the same time. Oh and did I mention a touch of sexy:) The tears of Naruto and Sasuke that broke my heart. I didn't know the Sakura was so close to being boarded! Oh Queeny this is getting really good and most of all really Scary! I can't wait for Sasuke to fine out who's in cahoots with snake man. I'm ready no no I'm kidding I'm not ready but I'm holding on for what's coming:) I have to believe our litter will make it though this. I love that you gave us the real deal with the suits. That's real life baby:) You're the best! The title was dead on the money ^_^

I love your Trilogy! The thing is that you're too good at suspense! The whole Izuna Uchiha thing has me on the edge of my seat, hoping against all hope that Naruto will fix him or if not that they notice his less than honest nature before something terrible happens. I will keep reading. Hopefully my heart doesn't stop before you finish ;) (heart attack from all the suspense).

Thanks for Sharing

CT

Love your story - great world and great trilogy! Now onto the current chapter comments.

At first I was like "Who's in the pod? Who's in the pod? I can't wait until they come out of the pod! Wonder what they'll be like? I hope they're nice! Can't wait until they're out of the pod!" But now I'm like "I wish they'd never found that pod! I hope they shove him back in the pod and forget they ever found him! I wish they'd never opened the pod! Or trusted him that much." heh he hasn't even done anything yet and I'm thinking like this. Incredible.
Keep going I wanna see if This guy gets his. I hope he does-before he gets a chance to do anything....
Great sory again.

Thanks for sharing,

Coolio69