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June 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I just noticed the parallels.
Great job weaving the threads like that, Madara and Sasuke. Hmm I haven't read canon in ages so I don't recall if Sasuke ever figures out that Madara is evil or if he remains blind to it all.
It's kinda surprising how he allows himself to be used by Maddy-chan like that. I hope things go differently here. Well Who knows what you've got planned.
Keep up the good work!
Coolio
Great job weaving the threads like that, Madara and Sasuke. Hmm I haven't read canon in ages so I don't recall if Sasuke ever figures out that Madara is evil or if he remains blind to it all.
It's kinda surprising how he allows himself to be used by Maddy-chan like that. I hope things go differently here. Well Who knows what you've got planned.
Keep up the good work!
Coolio
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June 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was lovely - so tense and yet so perfectly paced. On another note, why doesn't wednesday follow saturday?
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June 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is thrilling. It's probably unhealthy how much I care about these characters. I feel like I've watched them grow up
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June 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i am forever a fan of your storied.
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June 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
stories*
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June 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing. You really had me on the edge of my seat and I can't wait until the next chapter.
<3
<3
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June 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm re-reading 'In the cold of space you find the heat of suns' and just chapter 27. I'm reviewing here, because I don't know if you read reviews for the earlier stories in the series.
The author's note at the end made me smile. Yes, this storyline has moved far away from the original characters, but you know what? That's not a bad thing. I can see every character behaving in the ways you write them, yet still being who they are. Their experiences develop who they are, yet I still see the haughty Sasuke in the incarnation you've designed, the personality of our beloved #1 surprising ninja in the hybrid version, and so much of the others in their counterparts.
You asked your readers if they'd keep reading if you kept writing and (as if the reviews following weren't enough xD) the answer is yes. Yes, yes, a thousand times yes. This spacer world is so vibrant, the characters alive in ways I rarely see in fanfic, and the plot so addictive, that my impatience to get my 'hands' on the next installment of Leader prompted me to start over and follow the crew and friends from the very beginning. I'll be sad when the story ends, but the journey has been mind-blowing. I can't wait to see where they go and how everything will ultimately end. Thank you so much for sharing your vision with us.
Regarding Leader, Madara is making me SOOOOO mad and I'm eagerly waiting for when his cover story is blown and he's revealed for the lying, manipulative, greedy bastard he really is. This is a good thing, because while I love reading fanfic and can be drawn into the stories, this is one of the few that can draw real emotional reactions out of me. Keep up the good work!!
The author's note at the end made me smile. Yes, this storyline has moved far away from the original characters, but you know what? That's not a bad thing. I can see every character behaving in the ways you write them, yet still being who they are. Their experiences develop who they are, yet I still see the haughty Sasuke in the incarnation you've designed, the personality of our beloved #1 surprising ninja in the hybrid version, and so much of the others in their counterparts.
You asked your readers if they'd keep reading if you kept writing and (as if the reviews following weren't enough xD) the answer is yes. Yes, yes, a thousand times yes. This spacer world is so vibrant, the characters alive in ways I rarely see in fanfic, and the plot so addictive, that my impatience to get my 'hands' on the next installment of Leader prompted me to start over and follow the crew and friends from the very beginning. I'll be sad when the story ends, but the journey has been mind-blowing. I can't wait to see where they go and how everything will ultimately end. Thank you so much for sharing your vision with us.
Regarding Leader, Madara is making me SOOOOO mad and I'm eagerly waiting for when his cover story is blown and he's revealed for the lying, manipulative, greedy bastard he really is. This is a good thing, because while I love reading fanfic and can be drawn into the stories, this is one of the few that can draw real emotional reactions out of me. Keep up the good work!!
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June 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 22. Mannah, I am speechless after reading this chapter. All I can say is: Wow! Haru is amazing. I hope Itachi and the others made it out. I hate Orochimaru more than ever right now.
Excellent work, Mannah, and I really look forward to the next chapter.
Excellent work, Mannah, and I really look forward to the next chapter.
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June 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Talk about a roll coaster:) That was amazing! All that stuff happening! I was in the zone I felt like I was with them on their small ship:) OH Queenie I truly loved it!! I made sure not to read a head at all I only let my eyes read one line at a time. So now I'm breathing a little easyer everyone is all right. I'll be nervous about the hit the Sakura took later. The lovey Haku-san being queen. He must have been secretly watching Ha-chan to know he need rest when he did. It hadn't really click for me that Ran was also there. Itachi knew how to put the crews together:) The title is perfect. Another great adventure with our litter and crew ^_^
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June 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was as exciting as tormenting. It kills me to only have this one point of view so far. Haru was brilliant but other teams don't have Haru and Kazuki..... And how 's Sasuke and Naruto. I am relieved to see that Haru and Kazuki had made it (at least for a moment) but I can't wait to know are our main characters...