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Poor Haru! He's got the weight of the (his) world on his shoulders! At least he has Ran and Kazuki with him.
Nice use of the estimated survival percentage- really upped the tension. I hope the others survive! Brilliant chapter and can't wait for the next!

eeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaagggggghhhh!!!! Does that count as a review? And you've got me going back to the first story all over again.

Chapter 21. I knew something bad was coming and here it is. Also, I had a bad feeling when I saw the title of Part III. I just didn't think it would have come so soon.

So, Orochimaru rears his ugly head once again. I wonder how they are going to get out of this situation alive.

I loved it when Itachi called Sasuke "Sasu-chan". By the way, that was a good idea Haku had about dressing Itachi up as Sasuke.

Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter and I'm really looking forward to the next update. I'm going to keep my fingers crossed that everything will be okay.

RIPP HIM TO PIECES!!! I want it all to go without anyone leaving the ship but I would als like to see them all on the Planet like Robinson Crusoe just with a Family :-)

Ch 21. Omg! Omg!

So… this is the moment when everything goes to hell….. Later than I anticipated….
Well at least there was this dreamy part and about that I’m speechless. It was not only smut with growling possessive Nsaruto! It was more. It was wonderfully written and detailed smut with growling possessive Nsaruto!!! It was great and as hot as romantic and fluffy with all those relations to their first time together… now I know why….
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I was surprised when Sasuke so easily agreed to Itachi being his double…. I know there was no time for drama and Sasuke is an experienced LEADER but still… And no one panicked! Not even the young ones. Haru is a bit apathetic at times but other act cool too….. But Sasuke is exceptionally good with ‘the leader stuff’ and he deals well with those unimaginable decisions. And now I know well what Itachis answer to Orochimaru’s question will be… That was his plan after all… I thing that Orochimaru is the last person from hand of which Itachi would like to die … This is just… so unfair…
And I doubt that Oro would let he crew live…. Maybe they will think of something……

Queenie did you hear me breathing hard, a little sweat broke out on my forehead!! I said a couple charters ago "oh I'm ready for the adventure to began" with the old man plotting something was getting ready to JUMP off:) I was not ready! WoW!! This is just brilliant!!! When I read the title I thought wonder what she has in mind? Never in my wildest dreams did I think of this kind of diabolical plan by the snake man! I'm so proud of our litter and big brother:) I LOVED EVERY WORD! ~Bowing~ Thank you for all your hard work. That chapter has my blood pluming ^_^

Oh, Haku, Itachi! There are no words to express my admiration for them. Mannah, you are making me cry, is Itachi really going to sacrifice himself? Haku is a beautiful character, tough exterior soft interior (like Yoshino and Sumiko, characters that I love too) Beautiful Haku and Itachi, I don’t want you to suffer no more!

I am a little shock at the professionalism of Sasuke and the maturity that showed the Big Litter. I was almost waiting for Naruto to go all crazy over his kids. I don’t want them to be separate but at the same time I can’t wait to see the drama and the craziness that is coming.

Thank you so much for your hard work!!

I am nervous reading each chapter now. I don't want any one to die but I know Madara is up to very no good. keep up the awesome work. HUGS!!!!

Damn! It's so stressing..... Good chapter! Very interesting and moving the action forward. I loved every moment that made Madara uncomfotable or angry and I was pleasantly surprised to see Asuma do big part of that.... I wonder if he is doing this on purpose! I hope he does. This damn Madara has Sasuke on his side so I hope that everyne else are at least sceptic! Like Naruto and Kakashi!