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June 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! The plot has now thicken ^_^
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June 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Why isn't Neji seeing the lies and why isn't Shika seeing the f########ing pattern. They are driveing me mad!!! Do something! I need more suspiciousness in the world.
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June 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh no... this buildup is just killing me - you were kinder before, with your sudden shock abductions and bombings - this is possibly the cruelest you've ever been. Interesting how most of the home team left in charge in Tarrasade is somehow related to Hiruzen Sama - going anywhere with that?
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June 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have been following your story for a long time now. I love this saga very much. Thank you for sharing your brilliance with all of us.
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June 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20. Seems like Madara's plans keep getting interrupted, which is good.
But, on the other hand, it continues to look like Shikamaru isn't going to be meeting up with Sasuke and family.
The suspense with Madara is killing me because I know something bad is going to happen but you're making me wait, Mannah. But, you could be tricking me and everything will work out. Who knows. I'll just have to keep reading to find out. :)
Anyway, keep up the amazing work, and I look forward to the next update.
But, on the other hand, it continues to look like Shikamaru isn't going to be meeting up with Sasuke and family.
The suspense with Madara is killing me because I know something bad is going to happen but you're making me wait, Mannah. But, you could be tricking me and everything will work out. Who knows. I'll just have to keep reading to find out. :)
Anyway, keep up the amazing work, and I look forward to the next update.
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June 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm on pins and needles!
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June 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 19. Wow. Now it really feels like the kids and kits are growing up. But it will be better for Hikaru and Haru if Hikaru has his own mission and can excel at it away from Haru, his rival.
And Haku is in full queen mode.
And despite being a little older, it was sweet having Haru in the snug with his To-chan.
Anyway, thank you for another amazing chapter, and I look forward to the next update.
And Haku is in full queen mode.
And despite being a little older, it was sweet having Haru in the snug with his To-chan.
Anyway, thank you for another amazing chapter, and I look forward to the next update.
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June 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It is nice to see how everyone is trying to do their best. But it's also nice to see how the Uchihas are always the last to understand subtle facts and hints. Let us hope that that is a trait from the old ;-)
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June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A nice distraction from the impending storm. Hikaru is suddenly much more interesting. (He seemed rather stolid as a youngster when his favorite toys were building blocks.) I guess we won't see too much about how he does with Inari since you aren't sending any of your POV characters on that mission.
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June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
what a lovely change of pace - this was like going back into the beautiful world that they inhabit. If you're going to alternate with those ulcer-inducing Madara chapters, could you please give us two of these for every one of those? Or is that being too greedy?