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June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hikaru has finally appeared! Good! I finally get to know something about his doings.(quite a lot actually! I always pictured him as a chibi version of Itachi and I was kind of right… ^_^)
I’ve been waiting for some news about him! … or more like, I’ve been waiting for some place for him. I was afraid that he would feel neglected and became another jealous and mean character….
As I see he is not mangled with the Naruto-clones-litter, he as well as Hoshi and Haru is somewhere else. Aren’t they favor the not-hybrid kids???
Just kidding... I guess... It’ best for the kits to do some shooting…. (even if they didn’t actually get a chance yet...)
I wonder: Did Haru keep his mini data crystal array? I thought he had given it to Shika’s sister along with Sai… and now it looks like he still has it in his satchel! It’s cool if he does. I was afraid he had given Sumiko the gift from Klenn… and I didn’t like that thought….
As always – great update!!! THANK YOU!
I’ve been waiting for some news about him! … or more like, I’ve been waiting for some place for him. I was afraid that he would feel neglected and became another jealous and mean character….
As I see he is not mangled with the Naruto-clones-litter, he as well as Hoshi and Haru is somewhere else. Aren’t they favor the not-hybrid kids???
Just kidding... I guess... It’ best for the kits to do some shooting…. (even if they didn’t actually get a chance yet...)
I wonder: Did Haru keep his mini data crystal array? I thought he had given it to Shika’s sister along with Sai… and now it looks like he still has it in his satchel! It’s cool if he does. I was afraid he had given Sumiko the gift from Klenn… and I didn’t like that thought….
As always – great update!!! THANK YOU!
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June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OH Queeny I loved it!:) Did you make all those people take off their shoes in your compute room:) You covered a hole lot of things! This chapter helped me to let our litter go without tears. I so loved it! I'm glad that Hi-chan has been understood on some level and thing will change for the better?! Ho-chan is doing what makes her happy. The adventure was super wonderful today! ^_^
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June 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
In Kakashi's and Iruka's bed? wow... Kakashi probably wouldn't mind but Iruka would kick their asses for sure! I hope it wasn't just talking and that they will do some funny stuff, just to make this heavy forbodding atmosphere lighter.
Naruto was great! It was so Naruto-like to talk to Neji!!! Just great! Only he would do something so un-tactful just because he thinks it’s the right thing to do. No one else would have the guts….
Aaaadn…. HUGE relief – Kakashi knows that ‘Izuna-sama’ is a bit…. Not what they expected. I hoped he would be suspicious. The New Uchiha and Sasuke are his precious creation and I hoped he would be especially cautious about its future. It has to be him. He experienced much more in his life that Sasuke or Shikamaru. He knows the old Uchia and… I put my hopes in him.
Naruto was great! It was so Naruto-like to talk to Neji!!! Just great! Only he would do something so un-tactful just because he thinks it’s the right thing to do. No one else would have the guts….
Aaaadn…. HUGE relief – Kakashi knows that ‘Izuna-sama’ is a bit…. Not what they expected. I hoped he would be suspicious. The New Uchiha and Sasuke are his precious creation and I hoped he would be especially cautious about its future. It has to be him. He experienced much more in his life that Sasuke or Shikamaru. He knows the old Uchia and… I put my hopes in him.
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June 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awe sweet ending!!!! :) I can still feel the build up..... sigh Madara just need to like have a brain fart already...... grrrrrrrrrr :) Good chapter:) Love ya!
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June 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ch 18 great chapter!!!!
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June 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 18. That Madara wanting to have Neji kidnapped. Things certainly do go dark when the Madara parts of the story starts, but he is the villain, after all. :)
XD Haku would die if Neji and Shikamaru did it in his closet and made a mess on his kimonos. I would feel so bad for Kisame and Itachi having to deal with an angry Haku! Of course, that may work in Madara's favor because Haku would kill Neji and Shikamaru but then Madara would lose Shikamaru. I'm just glad this is just a fantasy in my head and won't actually happen in the story. I like Shikamaru and Neji alive and Haku not angry scary.
Anyway, back to reality. Thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.
XD Haku would die if Neji and Shikamaru did it in his closet and made a mess on his kimonos. I would feel so bad for Kisame and Itachi having to deal with an angry Haku! Of course, that may work in Madara's favor because Haku would kill Neji and Shikamaru but then Madara would lose Shikamaru. I'm just glad this is just a fantasy in my head and won't actually happen in the story. I like Shikamaru and Neji alive and Haku not angry scary.
Anyway, back to reality. Thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.
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June 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You're only letting us see all the horrible things Madara has planned because you're not actually gonna let them get to fruition right? Right, right? 'Coz everytime two characters have a conversation you've got me wondering who's gonna pop it. Don't do it, don't do it... also please let it be about his arrogance and hubris and failure to actually see beyond his own expectations - if everyone is more than Madara can ever conceive of, none of them will fit into his plans. By which right now I mean Neji is way more that a Hyuga and he's survived worse so he'll be ok, won't he? This plotline seems almost to be punishing those of your fangirls who whined about Shika needing a hotter love. We're really, truly thoroughly sorry by now, please.
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June 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Did you hear me yelling 'Thank God'!!!!! I'm so happy he told Kakashi. I have been on pins and needles since we found out what the old man is planing. Boy do I feel better now. You founded the perfect spot for Karin! You always fine a good and exciting way to add a old but new charter:) That twisted sister goes nicely with the old man someone to use her. The old man pissed me off acting like Upon-san is just to disgusting to be around. Plus the sexy bits with Shika and Neji was icing on the cake of this chapter. I loved it! Oh and Kiba talking about the new babies. I'm telling you I loved it all:) Another great adventure ^_^
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June 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hoho sai did the right thing, haru will be fine without him and i presume sai will be an ally if madara made a move.love your stpry, looking forward to know what will happen next, see you soon
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May 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think I’m getting some grey hair every time they do something according to Madara’s plan… It’s killing me. And Sumiko does too! Haru’s precious mini crystal and Sai in the hands of THIS child…. Gods help them all.. but if that’s what Sai wants then I guess he has the right to decide… or at least SHOULD have the right…. Any rights….
It’s impressive that this story touches so many problematic and almost taboo subjects, like AI, genetic, cloning, homosexuality, and even slavery… and much more….
I think now I’ll concentrate on the smut part! It was great!!! Sasuke was cute. I wonder about ‘the look’ in Naruto’s eyes saying that they should always have time to fuck…. Must be something!
It’s impressive that this story touches so many problematic and almost taboo subjects, like AI, genetic, cloning, homosexuality, and even slavery… and much more….
I think now I’ll concentrate on the smut part! It was great!!! Sasuke was cute. I wonder about ‘the look’ in Naruto’s eyes saying that they should always have time to fuck…. Must be something!