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I think I’m getting some grey hair every time they do something according to Madara’s plan… It’s killing me. And Sumiko does too! Haru’s precious mini crystal and Sai in the hands of THIS child…. Gods help them all.. but if that’s what Sai wants then I guess he has the right to decide… or at least SHOULD have the right…. Any rights….
It’s impressive that this story touches so many problematic and almost taboo subjects, like AI, genetic, cloning, homosexuality, and even slavery… and much more….
I think now I’ll concentrate on the smut part! It was great!!! Sasuke was cute. I wonder about ‘the look’ in Naruto’s eyes saying that they should always have time to fuck…. Must be something!

Chapter 18--I was kind of surprised at how sensible Su-chan was regarding Sai. But she has grown up, too, so she can't stay a spoiled brat forever. I don't suppose. I just hope Shi-chan and Neji don't accidentally find out about Sai while Haru's away. But I have a feeling Sai staying behind will be a good thing later on.

As far as the interview delay, they are playing right into Madara's hands, aren't they? Something is likely going to happen to Yukie and they are going to have to use Karin anyway. The whole thing is making me nervous, Mannah, but I can't stop reading.

Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter, and I look forward to the next update.

Sigh. always go with the gut feelings I say. LOL Easy soft chapter!!! They is a BANG coming!!! :) Loved it.. Thank you!!!

I'm off work today so I get to read you earlier than usual! (doing the happy dance) I couldn't wait to see what the title was talking about. And let me tell you it wasn't that:) WoW little Missy has really changed!! I believe her when she said she would keep the secret and protect Sai. THANK GOODNESS Sasuke-sama will not let Karin do the interview. Maybe he's not doing it for the right reason like stopping old man from taking over the world:) But not letting old man have his way is a good start. I love the beginning of this chapter!! Oh you know why huh:) That is the spice of love for our boys! I'm glad you can't see the bloody nose I got from that quickie ^_^

I don't know why, but its kinda very reassuring that SAI is staying, and that Sumiko is being so grown up, especially since everything else seems to be going to plan for Madara. I'm just glad there's some super genius type nosy kids who he can not factor into his calculations...

Ch 17 I am glad to see Sumiko Chan growing up. :)

Now I am scared. I hope every one on the Oak will be okay. I don't want any more people to die. I know it needs to happen but I love all the pairings. Keep up the AWESOME work. HUGS!!! <3

I never thought that Shika would have such a low self-esteem. But now Naruto and Shika mistrust the bastard and his plans can go to hell. I like it that Naruto never liked him and he will make Sasuke see reason. All death wishes to Madara!

I feel sad. Even if Shika and Neji feel/know that they are not rings "and forever", I still believe that they love each other with passion. But maybe is just me being romantic. Please Neji, wake up or your going to lose your man!

Naruto is, as usual, the only one able to see sense of the confusing situation. Hope he can keep the family safe.

Chapter 16- No, Shikamaru! Don't even think about dumping Neji for Madara. Thank goodness Naruto's looking out for Shi-chan before he does something incredibly stupid.

I guess there is no doubt that "Izuna" is Madara. I wonder what that slimy creep, Orochimaru, has in store for Sasuke and Naruto this time. I shudder to even think of it. I am guessing Madara is going to attempt to take over when Sasuke and Naruto are gone on the survey. What a crafty bastard Madara is.

Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah. I hope this review sounded somewhat coherent. I've been up most of the night so I'm decidedly sleep deprived. Regardless, keep up the amazing work, and I look forward to the next update.