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Holy shit, no no no! Somebody catch on, somehow, its too early for trauma... this might be the most adrenaline I've released in a while...

Regarding chapter 14, I kinda thought you were heading in the direction that Izuna-sama was not really Izuna-sama, but someone else. Now I worry about poor Shikamaru. I like the plant and how it interacts with the characters.

Ch 16 it was a relief too see Naruto helping Shika with Madara !

OMG!! It's getting close to some dangerous stuff happening huh?! I was nervous when I read the title! Oh To-chan and I did see the confirmation. Shika is not crazy or maybe I should say he is crazy like a fox:) Thank goodness Naruto knows. I didn't think about he could smell the difference. This is what I was thinking: Now at least Naruto will be keeping his guard up. I just wanted someone to be suspicious of the old man. Oh Queeny I know you have some big scary surprises in store for us! With O&M in the picture and your amazing imagination it can only be scary. I for one am looking forward to it ^_^

I can't even say how much I enjoyed Naru x Shika moment.
I've been waiting for that.
SadlyI'm kind of disapointd in Shika that he had fallen into Madara's trap so easily but it was to be expected with the way how his relationship with Neji was...
He always wanted.. no he craved to be loved and accepted. From the begining he was the only one to set it as goal to find someone and even though Neji had finally accepted him it was not what he was dreaming of... (And it wasn't just because of Neji's trauma....)
Aaaaaaaaanyway, Naruto was just GREAT!!!
Madara's plans – just scarrrrrry!
BUT he sends those encrypted messages... Shika shupld find them sooner or later. He doesn't recognize privacy after all... or maybe Haru or better Sai! I think Sai has even lesser concept of 'privacy' than Shika... I guess now I hope that Haru and Sai will somehow discover Izuna's real face.....

Good chapter! As always THANK YOU!

I Sooooooooo don't want to read what he has planned.... YES I DO... no I don't OHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I excited and scared and teary eyed already......... Sniff sniff........ Thanks. See ya next time......... maybe if I can crack my eyes....... of course you will tease us next chappy... I can feel it... THE INSANITY!!!!!! :)))

I'm both happy and sad to see Haru and everyone from the big litter growing up. But I'll adjust; I mean I have to. Besides, if I think it's hard to get used to the kids being on their own, I can't imagine how Naruto and Sasuke feel. These are their kids, after all.

Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.

It's difficult to to feel save alone when the last time was such a horrible experience.
I want to know what Ka-chan is planing with his life. Does he want to be Haru's bodygard?

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEE What a sweet loving chappy!!!!!!! :) So the bomb is coming huh??? I love it!! Thank you!! :))))

Even if it was one of those "kids' chapters" it was wonderful!
It amaze me that those kids can be so... normal and good, they don't have their own money or even any needs to have something (aside from Haru's very special needs like mini data crystal...)

I know that Haru is the focus in here but I can't help but wonder how Hikaru about all this. What path will he choose? Is he still jealous? Is Madara going to use his 'attitude' for his own goals....?
I'm not sure if I just didn't notice any moments where he had been mention or if is being kind of neglected...?

It's sweet that Shika still calls Naruto Na-chan. I love to see them together. Their relationship is special.

Oh, and one more thing about Madara hitting on Shika in the previous chapter - If Klenn (who was absolutely incredible) couldn't do it then Madara has no chance!!!

THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE!