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by mannahpierce

person liby318
schedule May 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am so far behind in reading, however I did want to say, I still get excited when I see a new chapter posted!
person Kyle
schedule May 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
;A;

Alll of the feels, Mannah.
Allllllll of the feels.
person cynaga
schedule May 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15 was delightful!
person roro237
schedule May 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm all choked up.. I have tears ready to fall:) The big litter is now young adults! I can remember when they were just a thought:) I laughed at the plant! That was the perfect gift from In-san and En-san. Ah the frisky growing pains of a young kit:) You know what I loved the most was how To-chan was there at ever turn helping make things go smoothly a long. To-chan is the best!!!! That was a lot of people places and things covered in Moving on. ~Bowing~ Thank you for all your hard work. I loved ever word ^_^
person angelj232000
schedule May 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved the ending. I loved that without Naruto knowing he helped Haru. I was crying after I read the last part. I really liked this chapter very heart warming. Keep up the AWESOME work. HUGS!!!!! <3
person SidonieStarr
schedule May 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So what's with that plant !?! Is it sentient? Maybe it can be friends with Sai.
person richon
schedule May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hahah it's not izuna uchiha but his devil brother madara !!love the way the story is going, your plot is awesome I love it see you tomorrow with more !!
schedule May 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Grrrrr.... But at least it means that Izuna was not an asshole after all.
I enjoyed the moment with Shikamaru. I hope the will be a lot of him and the rest of the grownups!
Great chapter!
person lonelylulaby
schedule May 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
GAH!!! I knew it, I knew it, I knew it. Especially when he said he was stunned to see IZUNA'S desk. I am frothing at the mouth right now. I just want to kill him before he does more damage and more Uchiha personnel are killed. I don't want anyone else to die, it's too sad after getting attached to them. Shika!!! You have to resist, don't fall for this mans tricks. Sweet baby jesus, I do not want to know what he plans for the far fringes. Will he get Centre involved? How did he pass as Izuna is it his brain in Izuna's body or something. That is so messed up, killed his brother just to get the family whatever Uchiha is. Someone has to think something is fishy, they just have to. T_T

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
schedule May 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am sooo glad that it was Madara after all. I assume that his cells were switched with the actual Izuna for imposterious reasons.
Also, the interaction he had with household members were delicious :))