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by mannahpierce

schedule May 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to hear Keizo is showing berserker tendencies. And Izuna is still scheming.

Sorry but I'm too tired to say anything else. My two-year-old nephew wore me out yesterday.

Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter, and I look forward to the next update.
person eunmook
schedule May 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
His brother's taste? Damn, and just when I thought you were putting up an evil Izuna, not Madara brain in Izuna body. Though it does amp up the sense of urgency, coz now its not just hurry and notice he's evil, it's hurry and catch on that it ain't Izuna at all. If that is what that hint was all about. I like that Shikamaru is bankrupting Uchiha coz he sees the threat of it slipping out of Sasuke's grasp, I'm all glee hee hee while Izu/Mad is counting imaginary treasure. Plus, Shika paid for his woods right? HA HA!
person Kyle
schedule May 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Theory: It's not Izuna, it's Madara, and they were twins!
And and oh my god this is so TERRIFYINGLY EDGE OF MY SEAT. ;A;
person cynaga
schedule May 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ch 12 Kaunas makes me so uncomfortable... esp his interest in Shika.
schedule May 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I wonder why Kakashi and Shika let Sasuke to get so close to Izuna.... They surely are suspicious about his miriculouus appearance.... Normally they all keep Sasuke as safe and as far from every potential danger and now .... I know that Izuna is Uchiha but there was somuch mystery arund this 'pod story'....I hope Shika is atleast one (or ten) steps ahead of him....
person roro237
schedule May 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The heroes we admire some how always have the ugliest of secrets or personality disorders:) I can only hope and pray that my the time Sasuke realizes it wont be to late.. Old man Uchiha can't even fan-ton on how many levels the New Uchihas have changed and the loyalty that Sasuke and Naruto hold. I thought he thought the kits were beneath him not that they look so alike. I'm hating him so much already and the story line is still in the early stages:) I'm glad Asuma has someone. Surprisingly it is TenTen:) I can't get off old man he thinks he manipulated Sasuke into server him tea! That just pissed me off!! Can he really think because he's an Uchicha that everyone will just start to follow him because of duty and service! I'm sure he and Orochimaru are banking on it. I love your story!
person SidonieStarr
schedule May 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's so difficult to watch Sasuke falling into a trap. That system with one hole sounds pretty ominous, too. As does stretching Uchiha's financial resources.
schedule May 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Some things stupid Uchihas of the past will get to know:
1 at the moment you have to lie to Neji to get to Shika
2 after being in love with Naruto everyone seems second best, even an Uchiha
3 noone exept Sasuke will agree to a new Uchiha-sama
person maliya
schedule May 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter. I have to say that I don't like Five, he is like a pervert cat hitting on poor innocent Haru. Anyway, I hope we can get to known him better. I am happy that Shikamaru realized the danger in which Sasuke is. Hope, he can find a way to ensure Sasuke´s "sama" title and leadership. Thanks you again for your hard work!
person Dawn
schedule May 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Welp ............ I knew it........ok I don't but still that feeling of dread comes forth even more....:( Lovely and more insightful chapter!! Thanks! write on!!