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by mannahpierce

person Anon
schedule September 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! That 'voice resemblance at the end was absolutely brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sasuke - that idiot almost gave me a heart attack! If he gets hurt ...I can't even imagine what others will do. I'm afraid Iruka may actually kick his ass if he'll be fine. It was so stupid to just leave like that and throw himself in the middle of something so extremely dangerous. He keeps others worry nd constantly makes troubles... I hope Naruto will finally wake up and slaps him over the head! HARD! (and then fucks him - just as HARD!)

Shika - he's so rebelious recently! Impressive! I hope Sasuke won't try to discipline him this time.
THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE! IT WAS GREAT!
- melissen
person Anon
schedule September 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! Intense! I'm kind of torn between not wanting the next update because then the story will last longer, and wanting it immediately because exciting! I really hope you continue writing in this universe. If not, I'll have to go back and read everything all over again. I might do that anyway...
person SidonieStarr
schedule September 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
For the first time it occurs to me you could very plausibly kill off Sasuke, instead of another close call. And both the minstrel and Yukie would live to tell about it. Oh well, I must remind myself again these are IMAGINARY CHARACTERS.
person sadie237
schedule September 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! SQ did you hear me yelling?!:) WOW BANG BOOM! That was incredible! Lord knows I didn't see that on the horizon:) I positively loved every word:) Who knew Yuki had real proof! Or did she:) She must have if she had a life broadcast. WoW I'm still hyped up!! Yea baby the old man has been outed:) And he had the gall to think about raping her! OH pay back is a %$#@#:) Sorry I'm rambling:) I'm just so happy! I will worried next chapter but for now happy happy joy joy:) WoW Kimmaru is a killing machine! Space Queen ~BOWING~ thank you for all your hard work. I loved this action packed episode:) I see there will be another 'confrontation' soon. I just hope Sasuke-sama will be alright ^_^
person Destiny
schedule September 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another reason to want the weekend to hurry up and come, but I'm gonna be so sad when this is finished. XD;; I've been reading back through the stories. Great job as always. I can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule September 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 103. OMG! Yukie has really done it now. I was real curious as to how she was going to bring about Madara's burning hell fire of anger but this is one interesting way of doing it. OMG the mayhem. I am curious as to how Madara's gonna reslove this with out burning his well laid pain into smithereens. This is getting real fun!
person melissen
schedule September 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Those recent chapter are so interesting and exciting that I really can’t wait for the next!!!! That’s why I wanted to thank you for making updates twice a week now! I still can’t think of this story not continuing….
person sadie237
schedule September 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! SQ wOw oh wOw!!!! Sasuke-sama or I didn't see that coming! My mouth is watering for more:) Yea baby I'll see you Wednesday ^_^
person sessha batto
schedule September 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Only five chapters left - oh no!! What will I do without this story to look forward to? And how can I wait until Wednesday to see what happens - talk about a cliffhanger! Lovely, as always. Your stories are so wonderful
person eunmook
schedule September 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Only five more?!! Feels like too little especially with Naruto having been out of commission this last little while. Great that now they all know, but too close to winding up. Are you gonna do odd side-stories? After, I mean?