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Izuna's thoughts sound annoyingly probable but Izuna doesn't know Naruto. He doesn't know anout the NEW Uchiha. They are family. They won't let him use Sasuke. Kakashi will not let him. Naruto and Iruka won't let him. Itachi would kill him if he tried (he's definately not someone who could be impressed with the legendary Uchiha figure... He could kill them all once so why not again...?)
=-melissen

Chapter 11--I don't like seeing Sasuke doubting himself as Uchiha-sama. Shikamaru has to figure out something. And it seems like Izuna isn't above using Sasuke's family to take the title of Uchiha-sama away from him.

I was both surprised and relieved that Naruto didn't want to take all 18 purebreds under his wing. XD Poor Kiba would have been overworked.

And I was really caught off guard by Five. Haru's reaction was priceless, to say the least.

Naruto only has a decade left? That's a lot shorter than what I thought.

Anyway, thank you for another wonderful chapter, and I look forward to the next update.

The last two chapters are great, loved the dialog between Kazuki and Five. Loved the "kitty-cat" remark. Although I am worrying over who Izuna Uchiha is and what his evil plot may be, I so love the story.

*throws tantrum* Izuna-san is surprising me more & more as we delve into his mind. And Five's intentions... Wow! As always I'm grateful for all the work you put into this epic story and I'm excited to see more.

Also, I completely squealed out loud for joy at even the mere hint of a Ran, Haru, Five threesome... and then had to look up how to spell squeal. "Your own giant plushie to sleep with." Every time you put Kazuki in a story I am overwhelmed with gratitude - possibly my favourite of the big litter.

Something just hit me, how does Izuna know Orochimaru? Has that man really been here for that long or longer. And Shika finding out that Sasuke isn't the true heir is just icing on the cake. This is just ridiculous, not the story just the Uchiha's rules and stuff. Sweet baby jesus, please Sasuke don't fall into his trap. Kazuki turning into a mini Naruto is cute, that means when he does go in a decade or so they'll have someone with his spirit. I'm so happy the children got to meet him and spend most of their life with him around. I like that Naruto isn't giving into calling Izuna 'sama'. I can't wait till the babies come. I wanna know their names and personalities, *jumping up and down*. THEN, Five hitting on Haru, that was the highlight. I'm glad he is going to wait and Kazuki's comment about having a life size plushie had me giggling. I miss them as children. I don't even want to know what Izuna has planned for HIS Uchiha.

Keep up the greatness, if you ever decide to publish I would be your number 1 fan ^___^. I really enjoy your world

WoW! Queenie this one was a roll coaster ride. I cracked up at Haru-chan getting hit on:) I was thinking wOw is it that time already?! Kids grow so fast:) I'm already nervous about old man Uchiha. The bastard is planing on how to take over and fine the weakest link! To add to that anxiety he says Naruto only has another decade to live!! That really threw me into a tizzy:) I know and if Sasuke has make peace with it I should to. I'll try harder:) But all I can think of is how hard it's going to be on Sasuke without him around. I loved every word of this chapter as usual. You're a fine wine that just gets better with time:)

Chapter 7--I would think Fugaku would have ordered any illegitimate Uchiha to be killed or hunted down and killed if they lived elsewhere but had come under Old Uchiha's radar.

Although, I do think the situation could be worse regardless if it is an assassin or an Uchiha. It could be an Uchiha posing as an assassin.

For now, I am moving on to Chapter 8 while awaiting Chapter 11. :)

Chapter 6--I don't think I realized how important Haru's work was in this chapter the first time I read it. He's definitely showing that he's a typed genius. I don't know why Shikamaru was so surprised. Haru does have his genes, after all. :)

I am running late, so I'll have to cut this review short for now. Anyway, now I'm moving on to Chapter 7.

oh... dear... that bodes extremely bad things. the dude is sooooooooo totally madara. I don;t know how uchiah will dodge this bullet. its worse than it was with ran.