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No! Uchiha Izuna turned out to be evil....
So he wants Uchiha for himself, hn....?
He will see what the NEW Uchiha is made of. I hope he will get the surprise of his (long) life.
I wonder if this will be the main antaginist-plot in the story...
I wonder who is going to die...This is such a good start. I hope there will be at least 120 chapters.

OMG! I'm getting scared! This 'old' Uchicha is thinking of taken over and killing Naruto maybe using the children?! Oh Queenie your type 10 genius is showing! You have put the wOw factor into play this time around:) Now the title is clear to me:)I haven't told you lately I love your story and it keeps getting better and better ^_^

Oh, the evil of it all! It's too bad Uchiha always finds itself repelling attacks, rather than going on the offensive.

And the plot thickens, how does this Uchiha-san know who and what people are. Did they have fox hybrids a thousand years ago? Anywho those twins are how Te-chan and Ta-chan use to be. Poor Temari and Gaara they don't know how to be parents. I liked this chapter cause we are reuniting with more beloved characters. GAH!!! I'm too excited for words, can't wait till Saturday

ja ne till next time

Chapter 3--Haru is so much like Shikamaru, especially when he comes in for breakfast half-asleep. For the sake of this review, I'm going to pretend I have no idea who is in the pod, although I know from having read the updated chapters. Of course, I enjoyed the Sasuke x Naruto. Even after all this time, I still cannot pick which "side" of Naruto I like better: fluffy-soft or growling-possessive. There are certain qualities of both that I like, but as of this review, I'm leaning more toward fluffy-soft. But, of course, that might change later on.

Anyway, now I am moving on to Chapter 4.

Okay, so in your last paragraph you gave us the fourth POV - even though we don't exactly know who he is yet. I guess we don't get to look in Haku, Kisame and Itachi's bedroom any more.
In "Iteration" I often wondered what your choices of POVs signified; I vainly hoped that writing from a character's POV would protect him, mostly because I love the brave and noble Ranmaru so much (and you repeatedly kill him off). However, you also wrote from bad guys' POV who are killed(Deidara) or should be (Kabuto). I think writing from many points of view worked for you, but I also know it's really ambitious. Completing a sprawling trilogy like this one has to be really hard - maybe limiting POVs is one way to get a hanle on it. Anyway, I still love the story.

Of course, you SEEM to be saying the mystery Uchiha is Izuna, because he and Madara were raised by a grandmother and there was evidence of Madara's corpse.

Now we have the forth narator. Let's hear more from him. Who ever he is.
And what a surprise that Gara is not the optimal parent ;-)

Chapter 9--Another great chapter. Looking forward to the next update.

Chapter 2--Nice of Sumiko to let Shikamaru and Haru have time together even if she still doesn't like Haru. Or, at least, is still jealous of him.

Forgot to mention this in my review for Chapter 9, but it's good seeing Gaara again. And Lee. But Karura and Yashamaru are something else.