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May 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 8 and 9 were great. Is it bad that I found it a little funny that the twins misbehave? Thank you for all your hard work to bring us this story!
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May 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
gaara's are littles monters !! naru had a great idear, teach someone to raise children is better to care for them during 14 divs !! who is the other uchiha, what happen with is grandlother and brother ?? love the way haru is jealous about five and how his brother can read him and explain things to sai !! like this story a lot , see you next sathurday !!
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May 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1-Gonna miss you, Klenn.
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May 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG more children...
I wonder if the pod man's point of view will be the fourth that was mentioned. You said that there are four POV in this story. It's Sasuke's, Shikamaru's, Haru's and... one more... Whose?
-melissen / YamanshiOchinashiIminashi
I wonder if the pod man's point of view will be the fourth that was mentioned. You said that there are four POV in this story. It's Sasuke's, Shikamaru's, Haru's and... one more... Whose?
-melissen / YamanshiOchinashiIminashi
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May 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hummmmmmmm... the kids were interesting. lol out of control.... LMAOo oh man...... still get a bad feeling about that other uchiha!! still bothers me... I wonder why?? very good chapter!! :)
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May 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!! I cracked up at Tsu-chan running like a missile to Five:) Papa knew what to do with eight little ones-Call for help:) I really loved the part of Papa being with the young ones! I LOL when the twin freak Gaarr out and he hit his head. I couldn't help it that was so funny to me:) Hey I just loved this hold chapter as usual. It was a joy to read. Thank you for all your hard work ~Bowing~ ^_^
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April 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hoho who is this uchiha what will sasu doi if he is izuna ?? will sasu have to battle to keep his leadership ?? love you story !!see you soon
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April 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Such a deft touch: all it takes is "It is silk, isn't it?" to bring us right back to SasuNaru as the heart of things. Sparse and simple exchange, but it manages to evoke all those standards of history and growing up and growing together that those two have gone through and we've gone through with them. Another brill chapter, thanks! Also makes me want to go back and read the first book right this moment instead of practicing my Persian as I should be.
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April 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i do a bit. naru's thought processes are fascinating. was there a reason for that besides the challenge of it?
anywho on to the chappie. heh, poor haru. it's hard when u r rival is practically perfect. i shoulda figured sai was involved. i think he's going to be a most important character.
it'll be interesting to see how the sitch with this new uchia envelops.
anywho on to the chappie. heh, poor haru. it's hard when u r rival is practically perfect. i shoulda figured sai was involved. i think he's going to be a most important character.
it'll be interesting to see how the sitch with this new uchia envelops.
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April 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I reaaly liked this chapter. Given how uncertain they all are as to who the pod peson is most of the characters ended this chapter on a happy note. I was very happy to see Haru happy. I also love bits about Naruto and Sasuke. Keep up the awsome work!!! HUGS!!!! <3