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person lonelylulaby
schedule April 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh crap on a stick, this just made everything more complicated. It's Izuna, I just know it. Hopefully they can do the same thing they did with Itachi and say he is no longer Uchiha because he is from a time long past. What I really want to know is who put him in a pod? Did he do it to himself or did someone else? I couldn't wait to read this chapter. I knew Sai had to have helped Haru a little bit, he likes math but, yea. Anyway keep up the great work

ja ne till next time
person Dawn
schedule April 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I got a feeling the guy in the POD is bad news!!!!!!!! Why do you make it feel that way???? LOL Lots of climax in this chappy!! LOVE it!! Waiting impatiently for the next Chapter!!! WONDERFUL!!!!!
person roro237
schedule April 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love being in Sasuke and Shika head:) Really I do! I know I like Haru a lot more being in his head. I was still upset with him about breaking the tablet on Papa's desk that was his Mothers. Knowing what he's thinking make me try to understand him more. And I just fell in love with Tsu-chan from the start:) I smile when I see his name even before I know what he's doing:) Five passed his first test with me because he doesn't get mad at Tus-chan for petting his fur:) I cracked up when I seen the nest building in the office. That is so our boys trying for a quickie:) Hikaru is still feeling jealous of Haru. I know that something will bring them together. I think that's how brother work for some reason. Ok I'm bring my review to an end finally:) Queenie I just love your story! It my adventure on Wednesdays and Saturdays. Thank you for ALL your hard work ^_^
schedule April 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Everything is precious.
This remains one of the last Naruto fanfic I still follow :) Be proud ;)
schedule April 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Damn it. Finally another smutt and once again Naruto is uke....
Oh well... maybe next time...

I wonder if Haru will like Five... He pays so much attention to him while he is jaelous.

Four points of view? Sasuke, Shikamaru, Haru and... who's the fourth? Or who will be the fourth???
schedule April 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ok now I have no idea where the old Uchiha part is heading to. But I liked how Shika solved the issue with Haru's jealousy :-) and the sex scene was so cute!
person lby318
schedule April 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 6 & 7 would great, can't wait for the next one to find out who was in the pod.
schedule April 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm seeing an Uchiha child of the old in an adult body. That could be rather cute :-)
person eunmook
schedule April 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
du du dunnnn... Are you messing with us now? I really liked the mood of this entire chapter - very upbeat, almost playful. I also like how you doled out the laughs with each character getting their share: from Neji missing his cue coz he's too busy watching Shika have fun, to Shi chan with his excitement over transparent-turning drawers; Five wanting to be Uchiha Sama, and then Rin and Itachi and the biohazard, and Kakashi wisecracking, it was all a perfect buildup to the naked long haired goofball giggling - the esteemed ancient ancestor arrives - Encino Man anyone?
schedule April 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.,, About Kakashi's 'chosen ones'... I never thought about Naruto as one of them...
I always considered Naruto to be Iruka's discovery beacuse it was Iruka who realised his influence on Sasuke first. He asked Naruto to join Sasuke in his bed when Sasuke had a fever and Kakashi was (as far as I remember at least....) surprised with his decission.
But I he may be Kakashi's if that makes Five the fifth... ^_-...
I tried to think back to the past of the story and i realized that I don't remember how they all came across Lee...
For a moment I thought that Sumaru was Kakashi's discovery but then I realised it was Inari and Sumaru had been the one 'sent' by his dying mother...
This story is really awesome....

You mentioned that Hikaru and Haru look alike, but in some earlier chapters you mentioned that Hikaru keeps his hair long so it would not stuck up.... So they're a bit like Sasuke and Itachi!

And about the pod..,. I thought there would be Madara in there, but it's not.
(or maybe it is... who knows.. except you...)
Now maybe it's crazy uncle Tobi? That would be... fun!

Was Shisui a character in this story... I think he wasn't. Maybe it's him...
Gods I can't wait to know!!

-melissen AKA YamanashiOchinashiIminashi